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評価: 60 / 1 Review / 2013/12/12 16:40:32

14pon
14pon 60 こんにちは こちらで始めて、ちょうど１年経ちました 英語学習履...
日本語

はじめまして、○○です。

私は英語が話せませんので、翻訳分を使って電話をしています。

かなり分かりにくいと思いますが、すみません。


私はあなたの銀行の法人口座を作りました。

私は自分のIDを知るためには、電話でしか教えてもらえないと聞きました。

私のIDを教えてほしいです。

セキュリティコードは1111111です。

電話は○○○本人です。

他に必要な情報はありますか？

できれば、日本語が話せる方と話がしたかったのですが、いませんか？







英語

Hello, this is XX, calling from Japan.

I don't speak English well, so I'm speaking looking at some written English. Please forgive （フォギブ） my poor English.

I have a corporate account with this bank. I want to know my ID. I know that IDs are given only by phone, so I am calling you.

My security number is xxxx.
Is there any other information needed?

I wish I could speak with somebody who speak Japanese. Is there any such people up there?

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jasmine_66はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2013/12/12 17:49:24

元の翻訳
Hello, this is XX, calling from Japan.

I don't speak English well, so I'm speaking looking at some written English. Please forgive （フォギブ） my poor English.

I have a corporate account with this bank. I want to know my ID. I know that IDs are given only by phone, so I am calling you.

My security number is xxxx.
Is there any other information needed?

I wish I could speak with somebody who speak Japanese. Is there any such people up there?

修正後
Hello, this is XX, calling from Japan.

I don't speak English well, so I'm talking to you and looking at some written English at the same time. ↵
Please excuse my poor English.

I have opened a corporation account of your bank. ↵
I would like to know my ID and I am making a phone call to you is because I have heard that this is the only way to know my ID.

My security number is xxxx.
Is there any other necessary information I need to provide?

I would like to speak to somebody who can speak Japanese. Is there anyone available for Japanese?

jasmine_66 jasmine_66 2013/12/12 17:50:35

I think you deserve a 3 stars rate....sorry for having marked it 2 stars......

14pon 14pon 2013/12/12 17:55:48

This guy says he/she can't speak English. You must make the whole thing as simple as possible. Forget about DECENT English.
I think nothing is wrong with my translation.

jasmine_66 jasmine_66 2013/12/16 14:43:35

Ok. Everyone has a different opinion.

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