翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

ご登壇ありがとうございます。それでは、福笑いの説明を行います。

まず代表者の方に目隠しをしていただきます。

そうしまして、司会の合図とともに一斉に素敵な顔を作っていただきます。

（ボードに１つののっぺらぼうの顔を描いた紙を貼り）
これは顔です。
でも、目も鼻も口もありません。

（袋の中から、それぞれの顔の眉毛、目、鼻、口にマグネットをつけたものを取り出して、顔に貼っていく。
　１つ貼るたびに、眉毛, 目, 鼻, 口と言う。）

（完成した顔を示し）
このように素敵な顔を作りましょう。

英語

Thank you for coming up to the podium.
I would now like to explain how to play Fuku-warai game.

The leader of the group, please cover the eyes.

With the signal from the emcee, please start making the faces here.

(A plain drawing of a face is posted on the board)
This is a face. There are no eyes, noses or mouths.

(You would pick magnets in the shape of eyebrows, eyes, nose and mouth from the bag and stick them on the drawing of the face posted. Every time you pick a magnet, you should say; eyebrow, eye, nose or mouth)

(Pointing at the completed face)
Let's make a good looking face like this.

レビュー ( 1 )

jasmine_66はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/11/07 12:45:53

元の翻訳
Thank you for coming up to the podium.
I would now like to explain how to play Fuku-warai game.

The leader of the group, please cover the eyes.

With the signal from the emcee, please start making the faces here.

(A plain drawing of a face is posted on the board)
This is a face. There are no eyes, noses or mouths.

(You would pick magnets in the shape of eyebrows, eyes, nose and mouth from the bag and stick them on the drawing of the face posted. Every time you pick a magnet, you should say; eyebrow, eye, nose or mouth)

(Pointing at the completed face)
Let's make a good looking face like this.

修正後
Thank you for coming up to the podium.
I would now like to explain how to play Fuku-warai game.

The leader of the group, please cover your eyes.

With the signal from the emcee, please start making the faces here.

(A plain drawing of a face is posted on the board)
This is a face. There are no eyes, noses or mouths.

(You would pick magnets in the shape of eyebrows, eyes, nose and mouth from the bag and stick them on the drawing of the face posted. Every time you pick a magnet, you should say; eyebrow, eye, nose or mouth)

(Pointing at the completed face)
Let's make a good looking face like this.

[rollingchopsticks]

Thank you for the review.