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評価: 50 / 2 Reviews / 2013/10/10 13:12:05

khanh
khanh 50 i love foreign language. i really lov...
日本語

コンテスト投票が終了しました

コンテストにたくさんのご参加ありがとうございました。
さきほどをもちまして、投票期間も終了となりました。
このあと集計などを行いまして、今日12日の21時ごろに結果を発表いたします。
全406応募から選ばれた初代チャンピオンはあなたが獲得するかも!?
結果を楽しみにお待ちください

英語

The contest vote was finished

Thank you for much participation in a contest.
I had a while ago voting period was also a end.
I am gonna checking the total and will announce the result today about 21:00 of 12th.
can you be the first champion chosen among all 406 application? ?
Wait to enjoy a result

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jasmine_66はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/10/10 13:43:09

*Thank you for much participation- Thank you very much for your participation.
*I had a while ago voting period was also a end.- The vote has been finished a while ago.
*announce the result today about 21:00 of 12th.-the result will be revealed on 12th today around 9 pm.
* Will you be the lucky one to get the first champion from 406 applicants ?

khanh khanh 2013/10/10 13:44:15

thank you for your correction

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mapmetroi 45 I love Foreign language. This is my f...
mapmetroiはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/11/05 12:14:51

元の翻訳
The contest vote was finished

Thank you for much participation in a contest.
I had a while ago voting period was also a end.
I am gonna checking the total and will announce the result today about 21:00 of 12th.
can you be the first champion chosen among all 406 application? ?
Wait to enjoy a result

修正後
The contest vote was finished

Thank you very much for your participation in a contest.
I had a while ago voting period was also a end.
I am gonna checking the total and will announce the result today about 21:00 of 12th.
can you be the first champion chosen among all 406 application? ?
Wait to enjoy a result

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