翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2013/08/17 15:12:53

honeylemon003
honeylemon003 52 以前、ホームページの翻訳をさせていただいてから、 翻訳というお仕事にとて...
日本語

本品は美しく健康的に、ハードな運動を必要とせず、ほぼ空腹感を感じることなく短期間でダイエットしたいあなたに最適です。
さらに血糖値が気になる方へもお勧めできます。食べ物を食べて血糖値が上がると、血糖値を正常化させようとインスリンが分泌され、血糖値が下がります。しかし、肥満になるとインスリンの分泌が悪くなり、血液中の血糖値が下がりにくくなってしまいます。 すると、血液中の糖分は中性脂肪に変換されやすくなり、さらに肥満に拍車がかかってきます。

英語

This product is perfect for people who wants to lose weight for beauty and healthy without hard exercises nor feeling hungry, and see the result in short period.
Also, this product is good for someone who is concerning about the blood sugar level. Every time when you eat food, the body produces insulin to normalize the blood sugar level, and the blood sugar level will drop. However, when people become overweight, secretion of insulin become difficult and it makes hard to drop the blood sugar level. Then glucose in blood become easy to transform to neutral fat, which speed up obesity.

レビュー ( 1 )

ynomura 52 USでIT関係しています。 翻訳は初心者ですが、徐々に勉強していきたいと...
ynomuraはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/08/23 00:39:37

元の翻訳
This product is perfect for people who wants to lose weight for beauty and healthy without hard exercises nor feeling hungry, and see the result in short period.
Also, this product is good for someone who is concerning about the blood sugar level. Every time when you eat food, the body produces insulin to normalize the blood sugar level, and the blood sugar level will drop. However, when people become overweight, secretion of insulin become difficult and it makes hard to drop the blood sugar level. Then glucose in blood become easy to transform to neutral fat, which speed up obesity.

修正後
This product is perfect for people who wants to lose weight for beauty and healthy without hard exercises nor feeling hungry, and see the result in short period.
Also, this product is good for someone who is concerning about the blood sugar level. Every time when you eat food, the body produces insulin to normalize the blood sugar level, and the blood sugar level will drop. However, when people become overweight, secretion of insulin becomes difficult and it makes hard to drop the blood sugar level. Then glucose in blood becomes easy to be transformed to neutral fat, which speeds up obesity.

honeylemon003 honeylemon003 2013/08/23 06:07:40

校正と評価ありがとうございました。

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