翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 53 / ネイティブ 英語 / 1 Review / 2013/07/29 16:38:17

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premiumdotz 53 I am a graduate of Teacher Education ...
日本語

ようこそ沖縄へ
外国人観光客大歓迎!
3000円以上のお買い物で5%OFF

英語

Welcome to Okinawa.
We extend our warm welcome to the foreigners and tourists.
You will receive a 5% discount for every purchase amounting to 3000 Yen and above.

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tokyomanly 66 Professional editor and sometimes tra...
tokyomanlyはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/07/29 17:08:56

元の翻訳
Welcome to Okinawa.
We extend our warm welcome to the foreigners and tourists.
You will receive a 5% discount for every purchase amounting to 3000 Yen and above.

修正後
Welcome to Okinawa.
We extend our warm welcome to foreign tourists.
You will receive a 5% discount for every purchase amounting to 3,000 yen and above.

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