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日本語

昨日、トイレ用ブラシ・洗剤・流せる布巾を購入しました。
夏になり、においがこもりやすくなってます。
すでに、消臭スプレーやタンクに入れる洗剤など使っていますが、
原因の根絶が必要なのだと思います。
先ほど男女ともに清掃しましたが、ずいぶん汚れていました。

次回からは、女性は女性・男性は男性で持ち回りで掃除をしてください。
順番などは話し合って、決めてもらえればよいです。
後ほど、清掃チェック用の何かを作ります。

各人が見て見ぬふりをしないで、快適に過ごせるようにしましょう

英語

Yesterday, I purchased toilet brush, detergent and flushable towel.
During summer, the smell becomes easy to build up.
I already placed the deodorant spray and tank detergent, but I think the eradiction of the causes is needed.
I clean the mens and ladies toilet earlier, but it was quite dirty.

Next time, please clean the toilet by rotating basis. Mens toilet cleaned by men, ladies toilet cleaned by ladies.
Please discussed and decide the rotation order.
Later, I'll make something to do cleaning checking.

Each of everyone of you please do not neglected it, lets try to stay comfortable.

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tokyomanlyはこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2013/07/19 15:52:32

元の翻訳
Yesterday, I purchased toilet brush, detergent and flushable towel.
During summer, the smell becomes easy to build up.
I already placed the deodorant spray and tank detergent, but I think the eradiction of the causes is needed.
I clean the mens and ladies toilet earlier, but it was quite dirty.

Next time, please clean the toilet by rotating basis. Mens toilet cleaned by men, ladies toilet cleaned by ladies.
Please discussed and decide the rotation order.
Later, I'll make something to do cleaning checking.

Each of everyone of you please do not neglected it, lets try to stay comfortable.

修正後
Yesterday I purchased a toilet brush, detergent and flushable wipes.
In the summer it is easy for smell to accumulate.
I already used deodorant spray and cleaner for the water tank, but I think we need to get rid of the causes.
I cleaned the men's and women's toilets earlier, and they were very dirty.

Next time, please clean the toilet on a rotating basis; with men's toilets cleaned by men, women's toilets cleaned by women.
Let's discuss and decide on the order of rotation, etc.
Later, I'll make something for checking on the cleaning.

I ask that each of you not pretend to overlook things and remain comfortable in your work.

Some common grammar misses, need work