翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

こんにちは。

先日、ご連絡して未到着の商品についてご連絡します。
いくつかの商品は、多く届いていたり、または少なく届いています。
ご確認宜しくお願い致します。

多く届いている商品
Bose Companion 5 　1点
トラッキングNo：000000
単価：＄0000

少なく到着している商品
Bose Wave music system 3 White ７点

未到着の商品
Bose Companion 20 ３点

商品の現在の配送状況を確認したいので、お手数ですが、ご連絡お待ちしております。

英語

Hello.

I am writing this to show you about the not yet arrived products which I told you before.
Please confirm it.

The products arrived a lot
Bose Companion5 1
Tracking number: No.000000
Unit Price: $0000

The products arrived less
Bose Wave music system 3 white 7

The product not arrived yet
Bose Companiou 20 3

I need to know the current status of shippment, so please take a moment to let us know it.

Best Regards
This e-mail is about some products which hasn't arrive yet.

レビュー ( 1 )

honeylemon003はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/06/14 13:07:36

元の翻訳
Hello.

I am writing this to show you about the not yet arrived products which I told you before.
Please confirm it.

The products arrived a lot
Bose Companion5 1
Tracking number: No.000000
Unit Price: $0000

The products arrived less
Bose Wave music system 3 white 7

The product not arrived yet
Bose Companiou 20 3

I need to know the current status of shippment, so please take a moment to let us know it.

Best Regards
This e-mail is about some products which hasn't arrive yet.

修正後
Hello.

I am writing this email to let you know about lacking of products. I received more and less product than I have ordered.
Please check it your side too.

The products arrived more than that I ordered,
Bose Companion5 X 1
Tracking number: No.000000
Unit Price: $0000

The products arrived less than that I ordered
Bose Wave music system X 3 white X 7

The product that hasn't arrived,
Bose Companiou 20, X 3

Please advice us current status of shipment.

Best Regards
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(This e-mail is about some products which hasn't arrive yet. )

もう少し手短に翻訳できると思います。

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