Shinya Yasuda (shinya-yasuda) — Written Reviews

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rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 11 Jun 2014 at 02:46
Comment 丁寧に文章の意味をとらえて直訳を避けるとよくなると思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 11 Jun 2014 at 02:56
Comment depositは前金なのでpayやpaymentを使った方が良いと思います。文章もやや自然さに欠けます。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 11 Jun 2014 at 03:08
original password again for confirmation Check if you get new information of Kickstarter Projects Click "Sign me UP!" when you complete and go to the next page - Click "Me" on the right-top - Click "Edit settings" in the menu - Click "Save settings" after choose your Time zone between Osaka, Sapporo, Tokyo You can see the time when the project finishes in Japanese time. It's easier for you to understand.	corrected enter the same password here again Check here if you would like to get new project information of Kickstarter Click "Sign me UP!" when you complete and move to the next page - Click "Me" on the right-top - Click "Edit settings" in the menu - Click "Save settings" after choose your Time zone from Osaka, Sapporo, Tokyo You can see the time when the project finishes in Japanese time. It's easier for you to understand.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

11 Jun 2014 at 03:08

original
password again for confirmation
Check if you get new information of Kickstarter Projects
Click "Sign me UP!" when you complete and go to the next page
- Click "Me" on the right-top
- Click "Edit settings" in the menu
- Click "Save settings" after choose your Time zone between Osaka, Sapporo, Tokyo
You can see the time when the project finishes in Japanese time. It's easier for you to understand.

corrected
enter the same password here again
Check here if you would like to get new project information of Kickstarter
Click "Sign me UP!" when you complete and move to the next page
- Click "Me" on the right-top
- Click "Edit settings" in the menu
- Click "Save settings" after choose your Time zone from Osaka, Sapporo, Tokyo
You can see the time when the project finishes in Japanese time. It's easier for you to understand.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 07 Jun 2014 at 06:21
original Regarding the schedule of vessel ETD has been changed caused of shipping line's matter. It has been changed as 19-Jun, and ETA will be 16-Jul. We are really sorry to keep you waiting but this kind of thing happens sometime. Your understanding is appreciated.	corrected The scheduled vessel ETD has been changed because of shipping line's matter. It has been changed to 19-Jun, and ETA will be 16-Jul. We are really sorry to keep you waiting but this kind of thing happens sometime. Your understanding is appreciated.

rated this translation result as ★ Japanese → English 07 Jun 2014 at 06:38
Comment 日本語を完璧に理解できていないため、原文と意味が異なってしまっているように思います。また、英文法もところどころ間違っています。

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 07 Jun 2014 at 06:48
original I will purchase 50 Please ship to the address below I will be using PayPal for payment. PayPal Address: Please send me a payment request.	corrected I will purchase 50 Please ship to the address below I will use PayPal for payment. PayPal Address: Please send me a invoice.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 04 Jun 2014 at 15:55
Comment 少し不自然な感じがします

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 04 Jun 2014 at 14:05
original Hello. Thank you for your bid. I contact you because there is a shortage of products. 〇〇 is in stock and I can ship them immediately, but I ran out cards as free gifts showing on item description, I can ship these 10 cards in this picture instead of them. Do you think it is all right? If you don't have any problem with them, we can ship your order as soon as we received your contact. I apologize for bothering you, but I look forward to hearing from you soon.	corrected Hello. Thank you for your bid. I am contacting you because there is a shortage of products. 〇〇 is in stock and I can ship them immediately, but I ran out of the cards as free gifts explained in the item description, I can ship these 10 cards in this picture instead of them. Do you think it is all right? If you don't have any problem with them, we will ship your order as soon as we receive your contact. I apologize for bothering you, but I look forward to hearing from you soon.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese

04 Jun 2014 at 14:05

original
Hello.
Thank you for your bid.

I contact you because there is a shortage of products.

〇〇 is in stock and I can ship them immediately, but I ran out cards as free gifts showing on item description,

I can ship these 10 cards in this picture instead of them.
Do you think it is all right?

If you don't have any problem with them, we can ship your order as soon as we received your contact.

I apologize for bothering you, but I look forward to hearing from you soon.

corrected
Hello.
Thank you for your bid.

I am contacting you because there is a shortage of products.

〇〇 is in stock and I can ship them immediately, but I ran out of the cards as free gifts explained in the item description,

I can ship these 10 cards in this picture instead of them.
Do you think it is all right?

If you don't have any problem with them, we will ship your order as soon as we receive your contact.

I apologize for bothering you, but I look forward to hearing from you soon.

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 04 Jun 2014 at 15:40
original この荷物運び用バックパックは、「ロールトップ」モードと従来からの「フラップダウン」とどちらでも使用できる耐水区画があることが特徴です。この伸縮性バックパックは必要に応じサイズを２倍にし、積載性が拡大します。今回のバージョンでは取り外し可能の、MultiCam Black 330Dコーデュラ製AustriAlpinCOBRA™ バックルがついております。 VX-21のバックパックとアクセサリは210デニールと軽量な布を使用し、PETで防水被膜されたリップストップナイロンで強化しいます。さらに、これらのバックパックは軽量、防水TPUリップストップ裏地の商品です	corrected この荷物運び用バックパックは、「ロールトップ」モードと従来からの「フラップダウン」とどちらでも使用できる耐水区画があることが特徴です。この伸縮自在のバックパックは必要に応じサイズを２倍にし、積載能力を拡張することが出来ます。今回のバージョンはコーデュラ社のMultiCam Black 330Dで作られ、AustriAlpinCOBRA™ バックルがついております。 VX-21のバックパックとアクセサリは軽量な210デニール繊維を使用し、PETで防水被膜されたリップストップナイロンで強化しいます。さらに、これらのバックパックは軽量、防水TPUリップストップ裏地の商品です。

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese

04 Jun 2014 at 15:40

original
この荷物運び用バックパックは、「ロールトップ」モードと従来からの「フラップダウン」とどちらでも使用できる耐水区画があることが特徴です。この伸縮性バックパックは必要に応じサイズを２倍にし、積載性が拡大します。今回のバージョンでは取り外し可能の、MultiCam Black 330Dコーデュラ製AustriAlpinCOBRA™ バックルがついております。

VX-21のバックパックとアクセサリは210デニールと軽量な布を使用し、PETで防水被膜されたリップストップナイロンで強化しいます。さらに、これらのバックパックは軽量、防水TPUリップストップ裏地の商品です

corrected
この荷物運び用バックパックは、「ロールトップ」モードと従来からの「フラップダウン」とどちらでも使用できる耐水区画があることが特徴です。この伸縮自在のバックパックは必要に応じサイズを２倍にし、積載能力を拡張することが出来ます。今回のバージョンはコーデュラ社のMultiCam Black 330Dで作られ、AustriAlpinCOBRA™ バックルがついております。

VX-21のバックパックとアクセサリは軽量な210デニール繊維を使用し、PETで防水被膜されたリップストップナイロンで強化しいます。さらに、これらのバックパックは軽量、防水TPUリップストップ裏地の商品です。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 31 May 2014 at 17:29
original I wanted to win your item on eBay but the setting did not allow shipment except for England and the United States. Therefore, I won this item by using your British address. If the charge is not enough, please send me an invoice via Paypal. When I bought your item last time, there was no problem with shipping to Japan so I would like to have the same shipping methods as last time. I am planning to purchase items from you on a regular basis from now on. Below is my shipping address. ↵	corrected I wanted to win your item on eBay but the terms did not allow shipment except for England and the United States. Therefore, I won this item by using your British address. If the charge is not enough, please send me an invoice via Paypal. When I bought your item last time, there was no problem with shipping to Japan so I would like to have the same shipping methods as last time. I am planning to purchase items from you on a regular basis from now on. Below is my shipping address.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

31 May 2014 at 17:29

original
I wanted to win your item on eBay but the setting did not allow shipment except for England and the United States.

Therefore, I won this item by using your British address.

If the charge is not enough, please send me an invoice via Paypal.

When I bought your item last time, there was no problem with shipping to Japan so I would like to have the same shipping methods as last time.

I am planning to purchase items from you on a regular basis from now on.

Below is my shipping address. ↵

corrected
I wanted to win your item on eBay but the terms did not allow shipment except for England and the United States.

Therefore, I won this item by using your British address.

If the charge is not enough, please send me an invoice via Paypal.

When I bought your item last time, there was no problem with shipping to Japan so I would like to have the same shipping methods as last time.

I am planning to purchase items from you on a regular basis from now on.

Below is my shipping address.

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 31 May 2014 at 17:39
Comment Excellent work.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 31 May 2014 at 18:21
original [Bcourse] ↵ ● HAPPY BAG Ver.B ↵ ● PREMIUM DOUBLE STICKER (PINK or BLACK) ※ You can choose the color and content for privilege thing , but may not meet your request because of a first-come basis. ※ The offer is valid as soon as it ends . ※The design of "PREMIUM DOUBLE STICKER" is same kind design as the stickers that we present to the members in existing.	corrected [B course]↵ HAPPY BAG Ver.B↵ PREMIUM DOUBLE STICKER (PINK or BLACK) You can choose the color and the content for the privilege goods, but may not meet your request because of the first-come basis. The offer will end as the goods are depleted. *The design of "PREMIUM DOUBLE STICKER" is the same kind of the design as the stickers that we present to the existing members.

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