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rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 23 Mar 2015 at 17:44
Comment 丁寧な訳だと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 22 Mar 2015 at 19:37
Comment 問題ないと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 23 Mar 2015 at 10:31
Comment Wowを訳すとしたら、ワォ、の代わりに、「なんと、」はいかがでしょうか？

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 22 Mar 2015 at 06:55
original ワォ、郵便局の話では、4ポンド（約1.8ｋｇ）以下に抑えれば、国際小包料金は40ドルぐらいになるとのことです。私としては必ず4ポンド以下におさめめます。私はこれを梱包します。（小包をあなたに）送ったら、合計金額、領収書の写真及び追跡番号をメールで送ります。ありがとう、J Hill	corrected 郵便局の話では、4ポンド（約1.8ｋｇ）未満に抑えれば、国際小包料金は40ドルになるとのことです。私としては必ず4ポンド未満におさめます。私はこれを梱包してもらいます。（小包をあなたに）送ったら、合計金額、領収書と追跡番号の写真をメールで送ります。ありがとう、J Hill

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese

22 Mar 2015 at 06:55

original
ワォ、郵便局の話では、4ポンド（約1.8ｋｇ）以下に抑えれば、国際小包料金は40ドルぐらいになるとのことです。私としては必ず4ポンド以下におさめめます。私はこれを梱包します。（小包をあなたに）送ったら、合計金額、領収書の写真及び追跡番号をメールで送ります。ありがとう、J Hill

corrected
郵便局の話では、4ポンド（約1.8ｋｇ）未満に抑えれば、国際小包料金は40ドルになるとのことです。私としては必ず4ポンド未満におさめます。私はこれを梱包してもらいます。（小包をあなたに）送ったら、合計金額、領収書と追跡番号の写真をメールで送ります。ありがとう、J Hill

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 21 Mar 2015 at 11:40
original 後ろ側のキャップには明瞭に「キャノン用トキナレンズ」と印字されており、それゆえ、あなたがどうして「ソニー・ミノルタ」マウント用レンズと間違えたのか理解に苦しみます。私としては、少なくとも購入金額（＄252）に加え、もともとの送料（＄20）の返金及び返送用送料（金額は決まってませんが）の負担をお願いしたいと思います。いますぐにでも、あなたの送付先住所を送ってください、そうすればこのレンズを出来るだけ早くあなたに返却することができます。言うまでもありませんが、私は大変不満に感じています。	corrected 後ろ側のキャップには明瞭に「キャノン適合トキナ」と印字されており、それゆえ、あなたがどうして「ソニー・ミノルタ」マウントと間違えたのか理解に苦しみます。私としては、少なくとも購入価格（＄252）の全額払戻しに加え、もともとの送料（＄20）の返金及び返送用送料（金額は今後決定）の払い戻し以外は受け入れるつもりはありません。では、あなたの送付先住所を送ってください、そうすればこのレンズを出来るだけ早くあなたに返品することができます。言うまでもありませんが、私は大変不満に感じています。

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese

21 Mar 2015 at 11:40

original
後ろ側のキャップには明瞭に「キャノン用トキナレンズ」と印字されており、それゆえ、あなたがどうして「ソニー・ミノルタ」マウント用レンズと間違えたのか理解に苦しみます。私としては、少なくとも購入金額（＄252）に加え、もともとの送料（＄20）の返金及び返送用送料（金額は決まってませんが）の負担をお願いしたいと思います。いますぐにでも、あなたの送付先住所を送ってください、そうすればこのレンズを出来るだけ早くあなたに返却することができます。言うまでもありませんが、私は大変不満に感じています。

corrected
後ろ側のキャップには明瞭に「キャノン適合トキナ」と印字されており、それゆえ、あなたがどうして「ソニー・ミノルタ」マウントと間違えたのか理解に苦しみます。私としては、少なくとも購入価格（＄252）の全額払戻しに加え、もともとの送料（＄20）の返金及び返送用送料（金額は今後決定）の払い戻し以外は受け入れるつもりはありません。では、あなたの送付先住所を送ってください、そうすればこのレンズを出来るだけ早くあなたに返品することができます。言うまでもありませんが、私は大変不満に感じています。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 05 Mar 2015 at 17:49
original Dear John, How are you doing? I am sorry that the contents of my previous email was not easy to understand for you. I was trying to ask you to upload YouTube the promotion video about HLCRIO151. When such a video is on YouTube, our company can utilise this for the promotion purposes. We could confirm the image video, but it will be even better if there is a video that explains about the product actually used. Please inform to me when HLBKIO102 is ready for shipping. And please ship to us the other products as soon as possible.	corrected Dear John, How are you doing? I am sorry that the contents of my previous email was not easy to understand for you. I was trying to ask you to upload the promotion video about HLCRIO151 on YouTube. When such a video is on YouTube, our company can utilize this for the promotion purposes. We could confirm the image video, but it will be even better if there is a video that explains about the product actually used. Please inform to me when HLBKIO102 is ready for shipping. And please ship to us the other products as soon as possible.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

05 Mar 2015 at 17:49

original
Dear John,
How are you doing?

I am sorry that the contents of my previous email was not easy to understand for you.
I was trying to ask you to upload YouTube the promotion video about HLCRIO151. When such a video is on YouTube, our company can utilise this for the promotion purposes.
We could confirm the image video, but it will be even better if there is a video that explains about the product actually used.

Please inform to me when HLBKIO102 is ready for shipping.
And please ship to us the other products as soon as possible.
　

corrected
Dear John,
How are you doing?

I am sorry that the contents of my previous email was not easy to understand for you.
I was trying to ask you to upload the promotion video about HLCRIO151 on YouTube. When such a video is on YouTube, our company can utilize this for the promotion purposes.
We could confirm the image video, but it will be even better if there is a video that explains about the product actually used.

Please inform to me when HLBKIO102 is ready for shipping.
And please ship to us the other products as soon as possible.
　

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 05 Mar 2015 at 14:41
original Would you send me a invoice of the merchandise that we ordered a few days ago? Since a quantity and the total amount of the merchandise that were delivered to our international shipper are not matched with the ones we ordered, the merchandise are still in USA. We would like to ship them to Japan ASAP, so please email me the revised invoice for our international shipper to confirm a quantity and revise the total amount. Thank you very much for your cooperation.	corrected Could you please email me the invoice of the merchandise we ordered a few days ago? Since the quantity and the total amount of the merchandise delivered to our international forwarder do not match the ones we ordered, the merchandise is still in the U.S. We would like to ship them to Japan ASAP, so please email me the revised invoice for our international shipper to confirm the quantity and revise the total amount. Thank you very much for your cooperation.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

05 Mar 2015 at 14:41

original
Would you send me a invoice of the merchandise that we ordered a few days ago? Since a quantity and the total amount of the merchandise that were delivered to our international shipper are not matched with the ones we ordered, the merchandise are still in USA.

We would like to ship them to Japan ASAP, so please email me the revised invoice for our international shipper to confirm a quantity and revise the total amount.

Thank you very much for your cooperation.

corrected
Could you please email me the invoice of the merchandise we ordered a few days ago? Since the quantity and the total amount of the merchandise delivered to our international forwarder do not match the ones we ordered, the merchandise is still in the U.S.

We would like to ship them to Japan ASAP, so please email me the revised invoice for our international shipper to confirm the quantity and revise the total amount.

Thank you very much for your cooperation.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 01 Mar 2015 at 03:58
original Please respond to my email last time. I attached the image of spec 00, so please confirm. The defective merchandise (product) are as follows. Thank you very much for your correspondence. We really hope that 00 is recognised as the high quality brand in Japanese market and we believe 00 is the brand which meets such expectation. I have no intention to say anything insolent to you,↵ but I felt relieved that your email this time includes the contents showing your intention of the improvements. We are seriously thinking about this brand and we really hope we can improve to the better direction based on the trust between you and us.	corrected Please respond to my previous email. I have attached the image of spec 00, so please confirm. The defective merchandise (product) are [s-v agreement] as follows. Thank you very much for your correspondence [word choice]. We really hope that the 00 is recognized as a high quality brand in the Japanese market and we believe 00 is a brand that meets such expectation. I have no intention to say anything insolent to you, but I felt relieved that your email this time includes the contents showing your intention of the improvements. We are seriously thinking about this brand and we really hope we can head toward a better direction based on the trust between you and us.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

01 Mar 2015 at 03:58

original
Please respond to my email last time.
I attached the image of spec 00, so please confirm.

The defective merchandise (product) are as follows.
Thank you very much for your correspondence.
We really hope that 00 is recognised as the high quality brand in Japanese market and we believe 00 is the brand which meets such expectation.

I have no intention to say anything insolent to you,↵
but I felt relieved that your email this time includes the contents showing your intention of the improvements.
We are seriously thinking about this brand and we really hope we can improve to the better direction based on the trust between you and us.

corrected
Please respond to my previous email.
I have attached the image of spec 00, so please confirm.

The defective merchandise (product) are [s-v agreement] as follows.
Thank you very much for your correspondence [word choice].
We really hope that the 00 is recognized as a high quality brand in the Japanese market and we believe 00 is a brand that meets such expectation.

I have no intention to say anything insolent to you, but I felt relieved that your email this time includes the contents showing your intention of the improvements.
We are seriously thinking about this brand and we really hope we can head toward a better direction based on the trust between you and us.

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