benizurudaito — Received Reviews
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Japan
Japanese (Native)
English
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10 Feb 2014 at 13:32
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Comment 日本語原文からすると、最初のパラグラフの主語にweを使うのは不自然。 固有名詞のスペル: Tokyo Big Sight、「イベントJAPAN2014」 Event JAPAN2014 その他単語や表現が直訳的で英語として不自然。persons->people; aud... |
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09 Feb 2014 at 07:37
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08 Feb 2014 at 00:30
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