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Japanese

コピーライターの名刺と独立告知DM、そして年賀状。
独立DMは、Independentという単語に隠れたpenという単語にだけUV厚盛印刷を施し、
コピーライターには欠かせないものとしてのpenを強調するとともに、
独立という決断をしたことを伝えるために「pen（筆）を執った」ということを表現した。
また、年賀状では、古いコピーを捨て、新しいコピーを生み出す意思を、
名刺をコピーしたビジュアルで表現した。

English

Copy writer's name card, independent notification direct mail and new year greeting card.

In the independent direct mail was printed 'pen' of 'independent' in bold letters to emphasis on the thing - pen - that no copy writers can do without it, and also to show the determination of being independent - I took the 'pen'.

Also in the new year greeting card, visualized copied name card to show that old copy has gone and new copy has produced.

Reviews ( 1 )

[deleted user] rated this translation result as ★★★ 13 Jul 2014 at 06:36

original
Copy writer's name card, independent notification direct mail and new year greeting card.

In the independent direct mail was printed 'pen' of 'independent' in bold letters to emphasis on the thing - pen - that no copy writers can do without it, and also to show the determination of being independent - I took the 'pen'.

Also in the new year greeting card, visualized copied name card to show that old copy has gone and new copy has produced.

corrected
Copywriter business cards, direct mail notifying independence, and New Year greeting cards.

In the independence direct mail, the "pen" in "independent" is printed in bold UV letters to emphasize that no copywriter can do without the pen, and also to show the determination of becoming independent - I took the "pen".

Also in the New Year greeting cards, visuals of copied business cards show that the old copies are gone and the new copies has been produced.

Needed some editing.

[peilan]

Thank you so much for the editing.
お勉強になりました。😊