Translator Reviews ( English → Japanese )

English

以下の商品をオーダー致します。
合計金額をお教え下さい。

決済はクレジットカードで可能でしょうか？
宜しくお願い致します。

Japanese

I will order the following product.
Please kindly let me know the total amount.

Is it possible to pay using a credit card?
Thank you and regards.

Reviews ( 1 )

[deleted user] rated this translation result as ★★★★ 13 Feb 2014 at 10:47

original
I will order the following product.
Please kindly let me know the total amount.

Is it possible to pay using a credit card?
Thank you and regards.

corrected
I will order the following product.
Please kindly let me know a total amount.

Is it possible to pay by a credit card?
Thank you and regards.

[iluvsnoopy228]

The wordings are fine. Using "a" in the first sentence would not point the amount to the product.
For the second correction, "by" and "using" are both acceptable.

[[deleted user]]

Thank you for your comments. I am now clearly understood what I was not make sure myself for using articles. Sorry for using your translation to clarify my issue.
I appreciate very much for your comments.