Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

こんにちは。
メールいただきまして、有難うございます。
急な依頼にも、快く受けて下さいまして、誠に有難うございます。

先程、前払い金５０％　US＄2,862の振り込み手続きを行いました。
送金明細も添付いたしました。ご確認をお願い致します。

４月下旬には、日本に到着をお願いしたいので、是非とも宜しくお願いします。

それでは、宜しくお願い致します。

English

Hi,
Thank you for your mail. I really appreciate that you willingly took over my sadden request.

I just transferred the advance payment, 2,862 USD(50%) into your account.
I attached remittance details too. Please confirm that.

Please make sure that it will reach Japan by late April.

Please take care of this.

Reviews ( 1 )

linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★★★ 23 Jul 2014 at 10:59

original
Hi,
Thank you for your mail. I really appreciate that you willingly took over my sadden request.

I just transferred the advance payment, 2,862 USD(50%) into your account.
I attached remittance details too. Please confirm that.

Please make sure that it will reach Japan by late April.

Please take care of this.

corrected
Hello,
Thank you for your reply.↵
I really appreciate that you willingly accepted my sadden request.

I have just transferred the advance payment, 2,862 USD (50%) into your account.
I also attached the remittance details. Please check it.

Please make sure that the cargo will reach Japan by late April.

Thank you.

全体的にはよく訳せています。
現在完了形を使うべきところと、指示代名詞（thatやit）の使い方が押さえられると、もう一段階良い翻訳になると思います。