Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

私が支払を済ませてから７日経過しました。
いつ倉庫から商品は出荷されますか？
状況をお知らせください。

English

7 days have been past since I made a payment.
When will you dispatch the item from the warehouse?
Please let me know the status.

Reviews ( 1 )

russ87 rated this translation result as ★★★ 15 Aug 2013 at 00:32

original
7 days have been past since I made a payment.
When will you dispatch the item from the warehouse?
Please let me know the status.

corrected
7 days have passed since I made the payment.
When will you send out the item from the warehouse?
Please let me know the status of the item.

The first sentence is not perfect tense, I'm not sure if you can use dispatch for items so I used 'send out'

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