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Japanese

素敵なC/Sを落札出来て嬉しいです。出来ればUSPS のExpress mail internationalで発送をお願いしたいのですが、可能でしょうか？もし可能でしたらインボイスを送って下さい。すぐにお支払いします。どうか、ご検討いただければ幸いです。

English

I'm very happy that I won such a wonderful C/S. I would prefer to have it shipped via USPS express international. Would it be possible? If yes, please send me the invoice, and I will pay you at once.

I would appreciate your consideration.

Thank you.

Reviews ( 1 )

kannon_11 rated this translation result as ★★ 06 Jun 2013 at 06:05

original
I'm very happy that I won such a wonderful C/S. I would prefer to have it shipped via USPS express international. Would it be possible? If yes, please send me the invoice, and I will pay you at once.↵
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I would appreciate your consideration.↵
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Thank you.↵

corrected
I am happy to win a wonderful C/S. Could you please ship it through the express mail international of USPS? If possible, please send an invoice. I will make the payment immediately. I request you to consider my request and oblige.

Revised the sentences and added missing details.

[kannon_11]

The last sentence should be:
I request you to consider the same and oblige.

[14pon]

Thank you for the additions and corrections.

こんな簡単なもの、ほとんどダメダメで、へこみました。

最後、I request you っていうのは、なんか強すぎる気がして、とても使えませんでしたが、そんなことなく普通に使うのですか・・？

[kannon_11]

「どうか」という言葉があるので、「I request」が適切だと思います。気軽にご利用ください！

[14pon]

いや、これは、まったく逆に理解していました。ありがとうございました。