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元の翻訳
「かつてない規模で業界を団結し、何百万人に違いをもたらす。―これが、まさにBBCの全てです。」とBBC事務局長トニーホール氏は声明の中で語りました。「BBCだけがパートナーを集め、この大望のある、そして国際舞台における英国の将来にとって重要な何かを成し遂げようとさせることが出来るのです。」

BBCは、１９８０年代初頭に「BBCミクロ」と呼ばれる同じようなガジェットを作り出しました。新しいガジェットはまだ開発中ですが、ＢＢＣは秋までには用意ができると期待しています。

修正後
「かつてない規模で業界を団結し、何百万人に違いをもたらす。―これが、まさにBBCの全てです」とBBC事務局長トニーホール氏は声明の中で語りました。「BBCだけがパートナーを集め、この野心的な、そして国際舞台における英国の将来にとって重要な何かを成し遂げることが出来るのです。」

BBCは、１９８０年代初頭に「BBCミクロ」と呼ばれる同じようなガジェットを作り出しました。新しいガジェットはまだ開発中ですが、ＢＢＣは秋までには用意ができると期待しています。

元の翻訳
Kawagoe is having remains of kura-zukuri buildings, old warehouse building, along the street.
It is said that the beginning of constructing this kura-zukuri buildings is the large fire in 1893, Meiji 26.
Merchants took particular note that survived buildings after the worst fire on the record back then were kura-zukuri buildings, and started adopting the kura-zukuri construction method.

Even though there were already modern brick and masonry building as fireproof buildings, merchants in Kawagoe chose this kura-zukuri construction method, and also adopted new building materials such as bricks, Oya stone, granite stone in the traditional construction method.

修正後
Kawagoe is having remains of kura-zukuri buildings, old warehouse building, along the street.
It is said that the beginning of constructing this kura-zukuri buildings was the large fire in 1893, Meiji 26.
Merchants took particular note that survived buildings after the worst fire on the record back then were kura-zukuri buildings, and started adopting the kura-zukuri construction method.

Even though there were already modern brick and masonry building as fireproof buildings, merchants in Kawagoe chose this kura-zukuri construction method, and also adopted new building materials such as bricks, Oya stone, granite stone in the traditional construction method.

元の翻訳
You will see the backyards with camellia blossoms and others throughout the year and "Tsubaki no Ashiyu (foot-bath)" after you walk through the store to the back.
Why don't you have a break at this Japanese place after you enjoy walking in town of Kawagoe.

There is a bar "Kura Ginger" where you can enjoy ginger ale and ginger tea which made from gingers made in Japan at the entrance on the first floor. Kawagoe is known as sweet potate, and "Imo Pan" with the sweet potato paste are sold only 100 everyday.
The selling points of this store is "Ashiyu bar" with this "Kura Ginger" and "Tsubaki no Ashiyu".

修正後
You will see the backyards with camellia blossoms and others throughout the year and "Tsubaki no Ashiyu (foot-bath)" after you walk through the store to the back.
Why don't you have a break at this Japanese place after you enjoy walking in town of Kawagoe.

There is a bar "Kura Ginger" where you can enjoy ginger ale and ginger tea which made from gingers made in Japan at the entrance on the first floor. Kawagoe is known as sweet potatoes, and "Imo Pan" with the sweet potato paste are sold only 100 everyday.
The selling points of this store is "Ashiyu bar" with this "Kura Ginger" and "Tsubaki no Ashiyu".

元の翻訳
Hodosan Jinja shrine is known for answering to prayers for protection from fire and theft. Also, many worshipers have visited to the shrine after it was awarded a star in Michelin Green Guide Japan.
There is "Okumiya", which is the original shrinem at the top of Hodosan mountain.

Kigan festival is held everyday at this shrine, and accepting worshipers's prayers for safety at their home, prosperity in their business, protection from fire and theft, vehicular safety, economic fortune, and other.

If you looked up the ceiling, you will see admirable dragon carvings.
There are total five dragon carvings, and it is said that they are protection a god from evil spirits.

修正後
Hodosan Jinja shrine is known for answering to prayers for protection from fire and theft. Also, many worshipers have visited to the shrine after it was awarded a star in Michelin Green Guide Japan.
There is "Okumiya", which is the original shrinem at the top of Hodosan mountain.

Kigan festival is held everyday at this shrine, and accepting worshipers's prayers for safety at their home, prosperity in their business, protection from fire and theft, vehicular safety, economic fortune, and other.

If you look up the ceiling, you will see admirable dragon carvings.
There are total five dragon carvings, and it is said that they are protecting a god from evil spirits.

元の翻訳
on January 14th, 2015, New song "Rafflesia" which is the theme song of　the TV drama "First Class" starring Erika Sawajiri on Fuji TV network was released. This entered the Oricon daily chart at No. 2 and its weekly chart as No. 4 as the first appearance。
On April 18, 2015, the first anniversary live "SOLIDEMO 1st ANNIVERSARY LIVE" will be hold at Ebisu the Garden Hall.

修正後
On January 14, 2015, their new song "Rafflesia," which is the theme song of the TV drama "First Class" starring Erika Sawajiri on Fuji TV, was released. This debuted on the Oricon daily chart at No. 2 and its weekly chart as No. 4.
On April 18, 2015, their first anniversary live show "SOLIDEMO 1st ANNIVERSARY LIVE" will be held at Ebisu Garden Hall.

元の翻訳
on January 14th, 2015, New song "Rafflesia" which is the theme song of　the TV drama "First Class" starring Erika Sawajiri on Fuji TV network was released. This entered the Oricon daily chart at No. 2 and its weekly chart as No. 4 as the first appearance。
On April 18, 2015, the first anniversary live "SOLIDEMO 1st ANNIVERSARY LIVE" will be hold at Ebisu the Garden Hall.

修正後
On January 14th, 2015, New song "Rafflesia" which is the theme song of　the TV drama "First Class" starring Erika Sawajiri on Fuji TV network was released. This entered the Oricon daily chart at No. 2 and its weekly chart at No. 4 as the first appearance。
On April 18, 2015, the first anniversary live "SOLIDEMO 1st ANNIVERSARY LIVE" will be held at Ebisu the Garden Hall.

元の翻訳
Thank you for lowering the price at this time. The payment has been processed, so please confirm the payment. Would you please let me know before you place products, especially the product A? I am willing to purchase all "Cat and Girl" product of the product A. If you additionally place the product A, please let me know. I will consider purchasing them immediately. Also, I will purchase some other products from you. I will let you know once i decide. Please send me the pictures of new products. I am looking forward to arrival of the products.

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Thank you for lowering the price at this time. The payment has been processed, so please confirm the payment. Would you please let me know before you list products, especially the product A? I am willing to purchase all "Cat and Girl" product of the product A. If you additionally place the product A, please let me know. I will consider purchasing them immediately. Also, I will purchase some other products from you. I will let you know once I decide. Please send me the pictures of new products. I am looking forward to the arrival of the products.