渡辺修誠 (watanabeshusei) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
In case if it is possible, is it OK to set the domestic selling price whatever more than MAP price ? We are a small company yet, we would like to have good relationship for long term, and wish to become a strong partner by growing together.

修正後
In the case it is possible, is it OK to set the domestic selling price whatever more than MAP price ? Although we are a small company yet, we would like to have a good relationship for a long term, and wish to become a strong partner by growing together.

元の翻訳
We are at setup phase of web store which is planed to open in March exclusively in domestic market. We assume to start selling xx there. We want to purchase 10pieces of xx and 2 pieces of yy, how about the payment method ? Also we plan to sell in overseas market from our store which has 〇〇 Japanese Yen of annual sales in domestic market only in the category of music instrument, would it be possible ?

修正後
We are at a setup phase of an web store which is planed to open in March exclusively in a domestic market. We assume to start selling xx there. We want to purchase 10 pieces of xx and 2 pieces of yy, how about the payment method ? Also we plan to sell in an overseas market from our store which has 〇〇 Japanese Yen of annual sales in a domestic market only in the category of music instrument, would it be possible ?

元の翻訳
We are informed that there isn't any company who has a exclusive contract. we would like to confirm with you whether the price setting is up to us, if it is more than the MAP price you have indicated or not. We plan to set $10 less than the price from W, in order to spread the xx, which is excellent, within the domestic market. We have been acknowledged the voices from famous artists who has practically tested the goods, which has been purchased as sample by NAMM.

修正後
We are informed that there are not any companies who have an exclusive contract. We would like to confirm with you whether the price setting is up to us in Japan, if it is more than the MAP price you have indicated or not. We plan to set $10 less than the price of vv, in order to spread the xx, which is excellent, within the domestic market. We have been acknowledged the voices from famous artists who have practically tested the goods, which have been purchased as a sample by NAMM.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your information.
I am relieved that the parcel has been arrived safely.
If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact us.

修正後
Thank you for the information.
I am relieved that the parcel has arrived safely.
If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact us.