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元の翻訳
Thank you for purchasing from us again. We'll let you know once the goods is ready as we did last time.

By the way, since you seem to interested in ○○, we would like to suggest our another product ⚫︎⚫︎ as well.

If you are interested in buying ⚫︎⚫︎ too, we can offer you xx dollar discount.
Please let us know whether you want to purchase it or not within two days, so we can pack them together.

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Have you read my last email? I'm very sorry to bother you but could you tell me which part of my explanation made you think there are two products?

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Thank you for purchasing from us again. We'll let you know once the goods [plural] is [s-v agreement] ready as we did last time.

By the way, since you seem interested in ○○, we would like to suggest another product ⚫︎⚫︎ as well.

If you are interested in buying ⚫︎⚫︎ too, we can offer you a xx-dollar discount.
Please let us know whether you want to purchase it or not within two days, so we can pack them together.

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Have you read my last email? I'm very sorry to bother you, but could you tell me which part of my explanation made you think there are two products?

元の翻訳
We've already reported to Japan Post that the package was damaged and the key was missing when we received it. You have reported about the damage to UK Royal Mail as well, right? Japan Post wouldn't do anything about if a buyer doesn't claim first. Once you have done it, Royal mail might contact you. If they do, please tell them the package was damaged. We hope to solve this problem as soon as possible. Thank you in advance for your cooperation.

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We've already reported to Japan Post that the package was damaged and the key was missing when we received it. You have already reported about the damage to UK Royal Mail as well, right? Japan Post wouldn't do anything about it unless the buyer files a claim first. Once you have done it, Royal Mail might contact you. If they do, please tell them the package was damaged. We hope to solve this problem as soon as possible. Thank you in advance for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
残念ながら4/4CEVN-2NA は品質検査をパスできず、まだ出荷ができません。新しい出荷は12月11日前後に到着できると予想しています。次回の出荷まで待って頂けるか、それとも違うスタイルや色に変更をご希望するか教えてください。
添付のお客様宛インボイスをご参照ください。電信送金に必要な情報も一緒に併せて添付しています。
2週間以内に出荷の準備をしますが、いつ集荷可能か連絡するためにフォワーダ―の連絡先の情報が必要になります。もし他に何か質問がございましたらご連絡お願い致します。

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残念ながら4/4CEVN-2NA は品質検査をパスできず、今回、出荷ができません。新しい貨物は12月11日前後に到着する見込みです。次回の貨物を待つのか、それとも違うスタイルや色に変更を希望されるかを教えてください。
添付のお客様宛インボイスをご参照ください。電信送金に必要な情報も一緒に併せて添付しています。
2週間以内に出荷の準備をしますが、集荷可能な時期を連絡するためにフォワーダ―の連絡先の情報が必要になります。もし他に何か質問がございましたらご連絡お願い致します。

元の翻訳
I have stock because I've been collecting German razors from all over Japan for last 5 years.
However, as it will be difficult to supply old models in a few years, I think they have value as a rarity.
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The razors I sell are all genuine. There are many different types of Iwasaki razor.
If you are worried about the product, I suggest you cancel your order.
I'll list another product soon, so it might be better for you to wait until then.
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As we didn’t find any marks of rust on the razor’s edge, it won’t be a problem to use it.
Please refer to the picture I sent you.

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I have stock because I've been collecting German razors from all over Japan for the last 5 years.
However, as it will be difficult to supply old models in a few years, I think they have value as a rarity.
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The razors I sell are all genuine. There are many different types of Iwasaki razor.
If you are worried about the product, I suggest you cancel your order.
I'll list another product soon, so it might be better for you to wait until then.
-
As we didn't find any marks of rust on the razor’s edge, it won’t be a problem to use it.
Please refer to the picture I sent you.

元の翻訳
いつもお世話になっております。今クーリエ業者にどこで貨物を下したか確認中です。少し前のことですので多少時間が掛かりそうです。間違えて自動的に再リスト化されていました。経緯が分かり次第お客様へ返金もしくは問題解決のための措置を取りますので、ご心配なさらないでください。

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（いつもお世話になっております。）今配送業者にどこで貨物を下したか確認中です。少し前のことですので多少時間が掛かりそうです。間違えて自動的に再掲載されていました。経緯が分かり次第お客様へ返金もしくは問題解決のための措置を取りますので、ご心配なさらないでください。