tokyoroman (tokyoroman) — もらったレビュー

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2014/02/19 16:49:56

元の翻訳
Our clan is composed of six swordsmiths.

There are discrepancies between the expressions understood in English and the jargon we are using. It is difficult to explain it in English, but I'll try to do as much as possible.

The first person succeeds the technique of ●●.
The second person succeeds the technique of ○○.
The third person succeeds the technique of ○○.
The fourth person succeeds the technique of ○○.
The fifth person succeeds the technique of ○○.
The sixth person succeeds the technique of ○○.

That's it.

I can produce it in the method you want, but what is your budget?

修正後
Our clan is composed of six swordsmiths.

There are discrepancies between the expressions understood in English and the jargon we are using. It is difficult to explain it in English, but I'll do my best.

One person inherits the ●● technique.
The second person inherits the ○○ technique.
The third person inherits the ○○ technique.
The fourth person inherits the ○○ technique.
The fifth person inherits the ○○ technique.
The sixth person inherits the ○○ technique.

That's it.

I can produce it by the method you want, but what is your budget?