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元の翻訳
Thank you for letting me know about demoday from Microsoft. I would like to participate also means we to the event. If possible, please tell me (start time, venue, program schedule of the day, the presence or absence of the participation fee) For more information about the event. There are members to join one other person besides me later. Please tell me if there is information necessary to make a reservation at the event.

修正後
Thank you for letting me know about the demo day at Microsoft. I would like to participate in the event. ↵
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If possible, please tell me the details of the event (e.g. start time, venue, schedule for the day, participation fee - if any). ↵
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There is another person who would like to attend. Please tell me all the necessary information to make a reservation.

元の翻訳
Regarding the trouble this time, wherever I inquired I was not able to find a solution.

I am really not satisfied, but I leave it at that.

During the next order period, please make sure close the caps securely.

In the near future, I plan on ordering ○○.

Changing the subject, can you tell me how to use ○○?

There are two bags with pink parts in them, can they be used up?
Rubber gloves are included so does that mean its dangerous to handle them by bare hand?

Please tell me the detail on how to use them.

修正後
Regarding the trouble this time, I was not able to find a solution wherever I inquired.

I am really not satisfied, but I give up.

For the next order, please make sure the caps are closed securely.

In the near future, I plan on ordering ○○, please take care of it.

Changing the subject, can you tell me how to use ○○?

There are two bags with pink parts in them, can they be used up?
Rubber gloves are included, does that mean it is dangerous to handle by bare hands?

Please tell me how to use them in details.

元の翻訳
I will request refund one of the items because there's an initial failure with it.
These are the failure I've found.
* The power switch does not work.
* The voice guidance does not work.

I've already delivered some of the items to my customers.
If I found another failure with those items, can I get a refund on them?

I'm looking forward to hear from you.

thanks,

修正後
I will request refund one of the items because there's an initial failure with it.
These are the failures I have found:
* The power switch does not work.
* The voice guidance does not work.

I have already delivered some of the items to my customers.
If I found another failure with those items, can I get a refund on them?

I am looking forward to hear from you.

Regards,

元の翻訳
One unit was quickly defective, thus I am requesting reimbursement.

The following two points occurred.

・I could not turn the electricity on the unit off or on
・I could not hear the voice guidance

There has already been a product shipment to the customer,
however if those units are also found to be defective early on will you be able to handle reimbursement for them?
I await your reply.

修正後
One unit became defective quickly, thus I am requesting a refund.

The following two points occurred.

・The on/off switch doesn't work.
・I could not hear the voice guidance.

There has already been a product shipment to the customer,
If those units are also found to be defective at an early stage, is it possible to refund those as well?
I look forward to hearing from you.