Dawn Croft (risingsuntranslations) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I have recently stopped shipping products to Italy.
This is due to the country's strict customs checks and the long period of time it takes for items to make it through.
My buyers have issued complaints when their shipments take a long time to arrive, and because I send my items without tracking numbers, I cannot trace their packages.
In many cases, I am forced to refund their money, so I can no longer ship to Italy.
Please contact another seller. I apologize for the inconvenience.↵

修正後
I have recently stopped shipping products to Italy.
This is due to the country's strict customs checks and the long period of time it takes for items to make it through.
My buyers have issued complaints when their shipments take a long time to arrive, but because I send my items without tracking numbers, I cannot trace their packages.
In many cases, I am forced to refund their money, so I will no longer ship to Italy.
Please contact another seller for purchase. I really apologize for the inconvenience.

元の翻訳
I have recently stopped shipping products to Italy.
This is due to the country's strict customs checks and the long period of time it takes for items to make it through.
My buyers have issued complaints when their shipments take a long time to arrive, and because I send my items without tracking numbers, I cannot trace their packages.
In many cases, I am forced to refund their money, so I can no longer ship to Italy.
Please contact another seller. I apologize for the inconvenience.

修正後
I have recently stopped shipping products to Italy.
This is due to the country's strict customs checks and the long period of time it takes for items to make it through.
My buyers have issued complaints when their shipments take a long time to arrive, and because I send my items without tracking numbers, I cannot trace their packages.
In many cases, I am forced to refund their money, so I will no longer ship to Italy.
Please contact another seller should you wish to purchase the item. I apologize for the inconvenience.

元の翻訳
The item I ordered on July 13 has not yet been shipped.
I am contacting you because delivery is taking a great deal longer than usual.
Please provide information on the status of this shipment immediately.
I also ask that you expedite your shipping procedures.

Order number: 00-187-3920

修正後
The item I ordered on July 13 has not yet been shipped.
I am contacting you because delivery is taking a great deal longer than usual.
Please provide information on the status of this shipment immediately.
Further, I am very pleased if you could start your shipping procedures as soon as possible.

Order number: 00-187-3920