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元の翻訳
May J. And Chris Heart Summer Live 2014

*Date: August 24 (sun)
*Venue: Tsugaru Global Village Ampitheater ( Aomori Prefecture Tsugaru city Tamura Tokomai Fujiyama.
*Time: Venue open at 4pm and the Show will start at 5:30pm

*Ticket fee
Designated block ¥6500(tax included) A-D Block
Appointed Day ticket ¥7500(tax included)- you can buy tickets on then venue
Parking ticket ¥1000(tax included) =( ticket Pia)↵
Avaible at Tsugaru Global Village only

修正後
May J. And Chris Heart Summer Live 2014

*Date: August 24 (sun)
*Venue: Tsugaru Global Village Ampitheater ( Aomori Prefecture Tsugaru city Tamura Tokomai Fujiyama.
*Time: Venue open at 4pm and the Show will start at 5:30pm

*Ticket fee
Designated block ¥6500(tax included) A-D Block
Door ticket ¥7500(tax included)- Door tickets will be sold at the theatre
Parking ticket ¥1000(tax included) =Avaible at Ticket Pia and Tsugaru Global Village only

元の翻訳
8/14 (wed) (a-nation island powerd by in-gelly Asia Progress—from a-nation—) Live!

Special reservation will be available from 6/10(tue) 12:00 till 6/17 (tue) 23:59.

修正後
August 14th (Wednesday) (a-nation island powered by in-gelly Asia Progress—from a-nation—) Live!

Special reservation will be available from June 10th (Tuesday) 12:00 a.m. until June 17th (Tuesday) 11:59 p.m..