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元の翻訳
I'm sorry that I send reply late.
I couldn't reply because one of mail I got was deleted by security.
When you finish, please visit Tokyo to enjoy!
It may needs a little experience and know-how of techniques to make body of radio control, but when I was young, I made a lot of many until I was satisfied by try and error. I think that now I can make radio control with this experience.
Do your best to make and enjoy!
I like blue X5R!!

修正後
I'm sorry for my late reply.
I couldn't reply because one of the emails I received was deleted by the security.
When you finish, please come visit me in Tokyo!
Youmay need a little experience and know-how to make a radio contro body, but when I was young, I made a lot of them without worrying much about errors until I could build something that satisfied me. I think that now I can make radio controsl with confidence.
Do your best to make and enjoy!
I like blue X5R!!

元の翻訳
Dear the doctor.
Nice to meet you. I am Hidetoshi Nasu.
I went to NZ last year to do your inspection. I saw your clinics in Takapuna and parnell. And I saw your website, and understood many branches of yours.
I felt that many people in NZ are interested in and need acupunctures and moxibustions.
I like rugby since my youth, and yearn after allblacks.
Nowadays,I don't play rugby very much, but I still have a lot of challenge spirits.

修正後
Dear the doctor.
Nice to meet you. I am Hidetoshi Nasu.
I went to NZ last year to inspect some hospitals. I saw your clinics in Takapuna and parnell.I also checked your website and realized that you have many branches.
I felt that many people in NZ are interested in and need acupunctures and moxibustions.
I like rugby since my youth, and yearn after allblacks.
Nowadays,I don't play rugby recently, but I still have a lot of challenge spirits.