ooneko (ooneko) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Although he is a genuis programmer, he cannot make great jobs in the first half part of the story because there is no electronic device in the school.

But please keep watching untill the final episodedo since he appears more frequently as the story moves on.

In another story in a coterie magazine, he stays with Owada Mondo who is a caring person and Makoto, and also with other charactors appearing in 2.

Because he is very lovely like a small animal, he gets in trouble like being teased or being made cry in the cartoon, but this makes you feel more like he is sweet.

Ah! I cannot wait to watch Chihiro in a cartoon film!

修正後
Although he is a programming genius, he cannot really play an active role in the first half of the story because there are no electronic devices in the school.

But please keep watching until the final episode because he appears more frequently as the story progresses.

In the fanzine, he stays with the caring Owada Mondo and Makoto, and is also depicted together with other characters that appear in 2.

Because he has a lovable personality similar to a small animal, he is often teased or made to cry in the comic, but that is what makes him cute!

Ah! I cannot wait to watch Chihiro in a cartoon film!

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元の翻訳
Thank you for your quick action as always.
I would like to ask you, do you no longer produce "a" or "b"?
As "a" and "b" are both highly valued items, we are sorry if you do not produce them.
If possible, we would appreciate if you keep producing the items.
We do hope you accept our request.

By the way, thank you for your action regarding "c".

We have done our payment via PayPal, so please confirm.

We look forward to receiving the items.

修正後
Thank you for your quick action as always.
I would like to ask you, do you no longer produce "a" or "b"?
As "a" and "b" are both highly valued items, we **would be very disappointed* if you do not produce them.
If possible, we would appreciate if you keep producing the items.
We do hope you accept our request.

By the way, thank you for your action regarding "c".

We have **payed** via PayPal, so please confirm.

We look forward to receiving the items.