JO HYUNMOOK (moogy1988) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
The product you have purchased, is inported goods in Japan, it is a internal free guarantee for 1 year.

Therefore the product broken should be sent to our store, and we will request to the manufacturer for repair.

We deeply apologize, but because of it has been 6 months since you purchased the product, you have to pay for the postage for oversea sending to our store in Japan.

After the repair, we will pay for the postage to send you back.

If you ask us for the repair, we will inform you our address, and it will be glad to let us know.

修正後
The product you have purchased is inported [spelling] goods [usage] from Japan, [comma splice] it is an internal [unclear] free guarantee for 1 year.

Therefore, the product broken [awkward] should be sent [use active voice] to our store, and we will request the manufacturer for repair.

We deeply apologize, but because it has been 6 months since you purchased the product, you have to pay for the postage [usage] for oversea sending to our store in Japan.

After the repair, we will pay for the postage [usage] to send you back.

If you ask us for repair, we will inform you of our address, and it [wrong subject] will be glad to let us know.

元の翻訳
Early in September and early in November cash-out hasn't transferred to my account.
Total amount is $10.
It's been 2 months after I request for cash out at September 3rd.

It is $10 for cash back sum on Summary expression.
However it hasn't transferred to my account.
Can you tell me why?

Is it completed for transfer?
Is there any defect of bank account's information mentioned?

I am so worried when I get any information.

Please find out what is reason for transfer delayed immediately and tell me.
And please refund $10 immediately.

修正後
Early September and November cash-out hasn't transferred to my account.
Total amount is $10.
It's been 2 months after I requested a cash out on September 3rd.

Summary expression states a sum of $10 for cash back.
However, it hasn't transferred to my account yet.
Could you explain?

Is the transfer request completed?
Was there unprovided information for the bank account?

I am so worried that I haven't received any information.

Please find out the reason for transfer delay immediately and let me know.
And please refund the $10 immediately.