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FR
Please log in to your account and refer to your purchase history for the returned goods procedure.
According to the B Policy rules, we will repay you the returned goods cost when the goods have sent to you.
Thanks in advance.

UK
Thank you for your contact.
If it gets past through the customs it will be delivered to you in 7 to 14 days!
But the customs always check randomly so I couldn't tell you beforehand.
Thank you in advance.

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FR
Please log in to your account and refer to your purchase history for the returned goods procedure.
According to the B Policy rules, we will refund you the returned goods cost when the goods have sent back to us.
Thanks in advance.

UK
Thank you for your contact.
If it gets through the customs without any problems, it will be delivered to you in 7 to 14 days!
But the customs always check items randomly so I can't tell you beforehand.
Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
I'm sending you the first draft of the submission article.

First, to be able to understand what are the contents that the readers are wishing for, I selected contents from various range of genre and types.↵
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I am planning to continue with this type of trial, at some point when I already hold a grasp of what the readers need, I will consider those needs as vital points and after that I will submit it.

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I'm forwarding you the initial draft of the article for submission,

The first thing I'm doing is selecting as broad a range as possible of various content and genres to get an idea of what kind of content appeals to the readers.↵
Let's keep doing this trial run for a while. When we come to know to a certain extent what the reader's needs are, we'll start submitting content that's more focused on what the reader's want or are interested in.

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Did you made the Miso soup by yourself? I love Miso soup very much and craving to drink it during cold times. Thank you for the recipe. I hope you don't overwork yourself.

I sent the confections this morning as soon as I take it out from the fridge, but as it is raw food, I do hope when you received and eat it, it didn't do anything bad to your stomach. I'm very concerned about that.↵
(But when I send the confections I did tell the post office worker that it was confections inside the parcel)↵
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This time I only sent Takoyaki snack but when the weight of the box is lighter I'll send more things to you. Even if you drink Brandy a bottle a day, it lasts over half a year right?! But I favor drinking coffee everyday, what about you?↵
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You made Miso soup by yourself? I also love miso and always feel like drinking it when it starts to get cold.Thanks for the recipe. Try not to do any extraneous work , okay?

I sent the sweets this morning. I sent them as soon as I took them out of my refrigerator, but I hope they don't upset your stomach since their raw. (I told the postal worker what was inside so they can take extra care.) I only sent some takoyaki snacks this time, when you want something a little lighter I'll send some other stuff. Even if you drink a glass of brandy a day there's still more than enough for 6 months. I drink coffee everyday, do you?

元の翻訳
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The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. This camera let's you preserve pieces of special memories in a beautiful gallery.

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The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. Let your pieces of special memories to be remained in beautiful gallery with this camera.

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The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. Let your pieces of your special memories remain in a beautiful gallery with this camera.

元の翻訳
The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. Let your pieces of special memories to be remained in beautiful gallery with this camera.

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The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. Let your pieces of special memories be left in beautiful gallery with this camera.