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Anime cuties would help Japan!? "Moeokoshi" all over Japan.

You may think of characters on TV when you hear " anime characters", but these days in Japan, because of the anime's explosive popularity, more and more community rebuilding plans called "Moeokoshi", where local communities create their original anime characters hoping that the original characters help them rebuild their local communities have been carried out. In this report, we are reporting the locally born cute girls characters. Go see the cute girls characters when you come to Japan!

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Anime cuties would help Japan!? "Moeokoshi" dominates all over Japan.

You may think of characters on TV when you hear " anime characters", but these days in Japan, because of the anime's explosive popularity, more and more community rebuilding plans called "Moeokoshi", where local communities create their original anime characters hoping that the original characters help them rebuild their local communities have been carried out. In this report, we are reporting the locally born cute girls characters. Go see the cute girls characters when you come to Japan!

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Commercial advertisement of Heat Tech

What is Heat Tech?
Heat Tech are clothes with cold protection produced by UNIQLO. Fibres of the clothes get warm when they absorb moisture. The most attractive point of Heat Tech is that Heat Tech are warm though they are thin.

How warm are Heat Tech?

Different users have different opinions on how warm they feel in Heat tech, but Heat Tech are strongly recommended for when you play sports such as golf or skiing outside. Some people bulk buy Heat Tech before they go on trips to cold weather countries such as Russia or Europe in winter.

You will only need Heat Tech even at the coldest place!

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Commercial advertisement of Heat Tech

What is Heat Tech?
Heat Tech is a clothing range with cold protection produced by UNIQLO. The fibers of the clothes get warm when they absorb moisture. The biggest selling point of Heat Tech is that it is thin and yet so warm.

How warm is Heat Tech?

It depends on the person as to how warm they feel in Heat tech, but Heat Tech is strongly recommended for when you play outdoor sports such as golf or skiing. Some people buy Heat Tech in bulk before they go on trips to cold weather countries such as Russia or Europe in winter.

Even in the coldest places, with Heat Tech there is no need to worry!

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Commercial advertisement of Heat Tech

What is Heat Tech?
Heat Tech are clothes with cold protection produced by UNIQLO. Fibres of the clothes get warm when they absorb moisture. The most attractive point of Heat Tech is that Heat Tech are warm though they are thin.

How warm are Heat Tech?

Different users have different opinions on how warm they feel in Heat tech, but Heat Tech are strongly recommended for when you play sports such as golf or skiing outside. Some people bulk buy Heat Tech before they go on trips to cold weather countries such as Russia or Europe in winter.

You will only need Heat Tech even at the coldest place!

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HEATTECH TV Commercial

What is HEATTECH?
HEATTECH are clothes with cold protection produced by UNIQLO. The fabric of HEATTECH absorbs body moisture and it helps to generate heat. And the key selling point is its thinness and warmth.

How warm are HEATTECH?

Different users have different opinions on how warm they feel in HEATTECH, but HEATTECH are also recommended for outside sports like golf and skiing. Some people buy bunch of HEATTECH for their trip to countries where it's very cold such as Russia or Europe in winter.

HEATTECH is a must-have for cold places.