kyoko301 (kyoko301) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
If the item is too small and not enough for your cat, you can return it by your "my page" of amazon.
So if you want to return, feel free to do return procedure.

If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me.

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If the bowl is too small for your cat, you can return it by making a return request from your "my page" on amazon.
So if you want to return the product, feel free to do so.

If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me.

元の翻訳

Please check the attached draft of the contract.

In addition, is it possible to place a prototype of 【nano】 in Tokyo Gift Show?
I know a campaign on Indiegogo is coming, but I think we can expect a synergistic effect by advertising ahead in Japan.
As the displaying period is only three days during Gift Show, it will cause no problem to やthe Indiegogo campaign.

I'll appreciate it if you could consider it.

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Please check the attached draft of the contract.

In addition, is it possible to display a prototype of "nano" at the Tokyo Gift Show?
I know there will be a campaign on Indiegogo starting in March, but I think we can expect a synergistic effect by advertising the product ahead in Japan.
Since the event will only be held for three days, it will not affect the Indiegogo campaign.

I'll appreciate it if you could consider it.

元の翻訳
You do not have to return the product, and I will refund you $250.
I agree to solve this problem by this way.

So , I want to refund you $250, but eBay system is already in the process of returning the product, and I don't know the way to cancel this.↵
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I think that, if you cancel the returning process, I can refund you.

I'm sorry to trouble you, but could you cancel the returning process, or ask eBay how to what the necessary process is?

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I agree to solve this problem by giving you a $250 refund.
You don't have to return the product.

However, the eBay system is already in the return process, and I'm afraid I can't issue a refund until you cancel the return process.

I'm sorry to trouble you, but could you cancel the return process, or ask eBay for the necessary procedures?