Abdelhalim Claudine (kurojin) — もらったレビュー

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11年弱前女性 30代

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この翻訳結果を"★"と評価しました日本語 → 英語 2014/01/20 22:24:35
コメント This looks machine translated

この翻訳結果を"★"と評価しました 日本語 → 英語

2013/09/19 15:01:40

元の翻訳
Along with that, in this work,

I want Koganecho to be the goal of work depicted as a "reference point".
For example)) From a house of Koganecho, in the case of a work getting out to a different town, the first is to do the work transmitting things which come from Koganecho, and to be the Koganecho station when you come back home, so trying to make a work which provide indications of things taking place at Koganecho reference point of action and so on ...
It can of course take place only in Koganecho.
I think assuming the work with above-mentioned conditions would be greatly appreciated.
Detailed rules and points below

修正後
Along with that, in this work,

I want you to aim at a piece of work that depicts Koganecho to be the "reference point".
For example)) In a case which a character goes out from a house in Koganecho to another town, try to make a piece that shows the character was in Koganecho at first, or shows that the character comes back to Koganecho station. In such way, you can make a piece that shows the reference point of action is at Koganecho and so on...
Of course, you can just shoot scenes only at Koganecho.
I'd like you to make your piece with above advises.
The followings are detail rules and some points to note.