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元の翻訳
About the meeting schedule, it is all right at 15:30 on 5th of July .
I will contact you later more about the place of the meeting .
we are adjusting the schedule of our boss, Hoge, now, but please understand that there is also a possibility that he can not be attended.
We are happy if you can arrange for interpretation.
Thank you in advance.

修正後
About the meeting schedule, 15:30 on 5th of July is fine.
I will contact you later more about the place of the meeting .
we are adjusting the schedule of our boss, Hoge, now, but please understand that it is also possible that Hoge may not be able to attend it.
We will be glad if you can arrange an interpreter.
Thank you in advance.↵
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＞依頼者さま：　2番目のHogeは上司の方の性別によってheかsheに置き換えてください。

元の翻訳
Notice for our security enhancement

We would like to announce that we might ask you let us check your belongings by security guards in occasionally before the autograph session and handshake session at the event below which we have announced. The purpose of doing this is for a security enhancement to protect guests and audience at the event.
Please follow a staff member's direction to keep your safety and make a smooth on schedule event.
Thank you for your cooperation.

修正後
Notice for our security enhancement

We would like to announce that we might ask you let us check your belongings by security guards occasionally before the autograph sessions and handshake sessions at the events below which we have announced. The purpose of doing this is for a security enhancement to protect the performers and the audience of the event.
Please follow the instruction of the staffs to assure everybody's safety and make the event proceeds smoothly.
Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
-May 31st (Sat)
"Jujika ～The Movie 'Gakkou no Kaidan -Noroi no Kotoba-' Ver.～" mu-mo Version Individual Sign Event
Place: Avex Building

-June 1st (Sun)
"Jujika ～The Movie 'Gakkou no Kaidan -Noroi no Kotoba-' Ver.～" mu-mo Version Individual Sign Event
Place: Avex Building

-June 3rd (Tue)
"Killing Me Softly" Release Celebration Mini Live & Shake-Hands Event
Place: Lalaport Toyosu

-June 4th (Wed)
"Killing Me Softly" Release Celebration Mini Live & Shake-Hands Event
Place: Nishinomiya Gardens

修正後
-May 31st (Sat)
"Jujika ～The Movie 'Gakkou no Kaidan -Noroi no Kotoba-' Ver.～" mu-mo Version Individual Autograph Event
Place: Avex Building

-June 1st (Sun)
"Jujika ～The Movie 'Gakkou no Kaidan -Noroi no Kotoba-' Ver.～" mu-mo Version Individual Autograph Event
Place: Avex Building

-June 3rd (Tue)
"Killing Me Softly" Release Celebration Mini Live & Shake-Hands Event
Place: Lalaport Toyosu

-June 4th (Wed)
"Killing Me Softly" Release Celebration Mini Live & Shake-Hands Event
Place: Nishinomiya Gardens