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Because many had got down at airport,I have had a feeling that many would take part in till the last day of flight.
The morning abit earier meeting,tickets to various site is paid by personal,but it is very good tour because you can effectivly go round listening to a guide introduction.This time,the guide is one-year newbee but I feel very delightful to feer her honest.Cheper than route-bus in tour money,you may think this fare is ok or not.At the time you visit the south,this tour is very reccomendable a half-day tour.

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Because many had got [tense confusion] down [wrong usage] at the airport, I had a feeling that many would take part in [what?] till the last day of flight.
The morning abit [spelling] earier [spelling] meeting, tickets to various site is [s-v agreement, tense confusion] paid by personal,but it is very good tour because you can effectivly [spelling] go round listening to a guide introduction.This time,the guide is one-year newbee [spelling] but I feel very delightful to feer [spelling] her honest. Cheper [spelling] than route-bus in tour money,you may think this fare is ok or not.At the time you visit the south,this tour is very reccomendable [spelling] a half-day tour.

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Thank you for your message.
A sending method will be international e packet.
and can be confirmed of sending.

Thank you for your message.

A setting of fee is not set individually at amazon`s setting.↵
I am really sorry for that.

Thank you for your message.
Sending to china is possible.
If you purchase,I am delighted to send to you.

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Thank you for your message.
It will be sent with the International E-Packet.
You can check status of the package with the ID number.

Thank you for your message.

We are afraid that the shipping fee is not individually set at amazon.com.

Thank you for your message.
We can send item to China
We will be happy to receive your order.

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Wonderful points of "smart sink" and "smart vegetable plant" is that they ccan be used by Android OS.
Stated quite simply,they can be realized relatively cheaply.
Android OS mutipurpose(open-source and free supply of SDK) make this possible.

By seeing these things,I get delusion that various sensor techniques of world and Android OS is connected with each other.

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Wonderful points of "smart sink" and "smart vegetable plant" is that they can be used by Android OS.
Stated quite simply, they can be realized relatively cheaply.
Android OS mutipurpose feature(open-source and free supply of SDK) makes this possible.

By seeing these things, I get delusion that worldwide various sensor techniques and Android OS are likely to be connected each other.

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I am also want a function adding "source".It is delightful that the function can be used early.
Also,I,too,think a funtion uploading video is not needed.↵
Like you have said,the function is done by only making use of YouTube or Vimeo and the function is not run by a normal server because the server is added load.
We should omit a useless funtion a few want.↵
Considering in purpose of porn,it is out of a question.

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I hope for a function to add a source, too. If you implement it soon, I'll be very glad.
And I think the function to upload videos is unnecessary, too. As you say, we should just use YouTube, Vimeo, and so on. ↵
We can't carry it on by usual servers because it would be heavy on them.
We should delete functions only a few people would want. It would be out of a question if they wanted to use them for sexual purposes.

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Today,I have received the ring by FEDEX mail.
A size is exact,and I like it.
I ask same result for next orders.

More,I have a demand from next orders.↵
An attached sales receipt stapled,that makes holes.So,I am delightful if you do not staple an item for next time.

I leave that entirely to you.

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I received the ring by FEDEX today.
The size is exactly right and I like it.
I'd like to purchase from you again.

Would you do me a favor and do not staple the sales sheet but just let it attach as it is from next time because a stapling makes holes.

Please take care my request. ↵
Thank you.↵
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深剃りが出来る玉鋼のカミソリが欲しいのですが、どのかみそりが良い品で長持ちするのか解らないのです。ナガマサとテラマサには前から目をつけていました。出来れば５００ドル以内で手に入れたいのです。もしよろしければ、この条件に合うようなカミソリを見繕ってくれないでしょうか？ほかにも質問があります。テラマサとナガマサの職人について、その由来や歴史についての参考資料を持っていますでしょうか？

イノウエトウセキのカミソリはどれも好きです。古いのと新しいのでは大きな違いがあります。私の古いカミソリは新しいカリソリよりも炭素がより含有されているように思います。収集家じゃないので、私にとっては剃れればそれでいいのです。とても良いカミソリです。

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深剃りが出来る玉鋼のカミソリが欲しいのですが、どのかみそりが良い品で長持ちするのか解らないのです。ナガマサとテラマサには前から目をつけていました。出来れば（砥石込み）５００ドル以内で手に入れたいのです。もしよろしければ、この条件に合うようなカミソリを見繕ってくれないでしょうか？もう1つ質問があります。テラマサとナガマサの職人について、その由来や歴史についての参考資料を持っていますでしょうか？

イノウエトウセキのカミソリはどれも好きです。古いのと新しいのでは大きな違いがあります。私の古いカミソリは新しいカリソリよりも炭素がより含有されているように思います。収集家じゃないので、私にとっては剃れればそれでいいのです。とても良いカミソリです。