Andy An (andychairman) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Good morning.

As your company refused the returned goods, the goods were returned back today.
Will you accept the returned goods?
I have contacted the post office for the goods for many times and I feel that you don't want to accept the goods absolutely.
When you intend to refund an article, please inform it of a method to handle it appropriately.
When I do not intend to receive an article, I ask for a claim and intend to follow my own right.

修正後
Hello.

As your company refused to accept the returned goods, they were returned today.
Are you really willing to accept them?
I have contacted the post office regarding the goods many times and I feel that you don't want to accept the goods absolutely.
If you intend to refund for the article, please inform me of a method to handle it appropriately.
When you do not intend to receive the article, I will file a claim and intend to protect myself.

元の翻訳
Good morning.

As your company refused the returned goods, the goods were returned back today.
Will you accept the returned goods?
I have contacted the post office for the goods for many times and I feel that you don't want to accept the goods absolutely.
When you intend to refund an article, please inform it of a method to handle it appropriately.
When I do not intend to receive an article, I ask for a claim and intend to follow my own right.

修正後
Good morning.

Hello,↵
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Because your company refused to receive the returned goods, they have been returned to me today.
Are you willing to accept the returned goods?
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I have contacted the post office about the shipment status of the goods many times and I feel that you are not willing to accept the return.
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If you have a will to accept them and make a refund, please inform me what is an appropriate method for processing the return..
If you don’t have a will to accept them, I will escalate this matter as a claim to protect myself.↵

元の翻訳
Have you finished dealing with PayPal claim? I want to repay as soon as early.
I am so sorry that my PC is not available now, because I am not in the office.
As soon as I get home, I will confirm PayPal, so please wait a moment. Thanks.

修正後
Have you finished the procedure to escalate it to a PayPal claim? I will process your refund as soon as possible.
However, I am afraid to inform you that I am out of office now, so I don'have any way to access my PC.
Please wait for a while because I will check PayPal immediately once I get home. Thank you for your understanding.↵