abel2rieman — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
We sincerely apologize for taking an action that resulted in the suspension of the account.
Upon reflection it stemmed from our not taking seriously enough the possibility of violating the Amazon's polity on intellectual property protection, and we regret the error.
Currently we are thoroughly reviewing the event re-filing.
To fully understand and comply with the Amazon policy, we will take the following steps to improve our operations:

1. Contact all manufacturers of items to be sold to obtain the permission or confirmation for listing the item on the Amazon Market Place;

修正後
We sincerely apologize for taking an action that resulted in the suspension of our account.
Upon reflection it stemmed from our not taking seriously enough the possibility of violating Amazon's polity on intellectual property protection, and we regret the error.
Currently we are thoroughly reviewing the event re-filing.
To fully understand and comply with Amazon policy, we will take the following steps to improve our operations:

1. Contact all manufacturers of items to be sold to obtain the permission or confirmation for listing the item on Amazon Marketplace.

元の翻訳
By inputting "japan import" in the entry space around the center and clicking "Search," you may see hundreds of thousands of Japanese products as in the page below.

修正後
By typing "japan import" in blank field around the center and clicking "Search," you will see hundreds of thousands of Japanese products as in the page below.