翻訳者レビュー ( 英語 → 日本語 )

英語

商品の方既に受け取りました。

下記の追跡番号で到着した商品は8つではなく○○の追跡番号の4つでした。

○○の注文番号の商品どうなっていますでしょうか？

日本語

I've already received the product.
The number of the products which arrived according to the following tracking number wasn't eight.
Instead, it was four and the tracking number was ○○.
How is the product whose order number is ○○ going?

レビュー ( 1 )

mars16はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2018/02/02 22:35:17

元の翻訳
I've already received the product.
The number of the products which arrived according to the following tracking number wasn't eight.
Instead, it was four and the tracking number was ○○.
How is the product whose order number is ○○ going?

修正後
I've already received the product.
The number of the products which arrived with the following tracking number wasn't eight.
Instead, it was four and the tracking number was ○○.
How is the product with the order number of ○○ going?

withでどうでしょうか

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ご指摘ありがとうございます。
おっしゃる通りです。accoding to や whose を使う言い方ではまどろっこしいですよね。
どう訳そうか悩んだ部分だったので、お勉強になりました。