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日本語

また、主流煙は酸性。副流煙はアルカリ性で、目や鼻の粘膜を刺激します。

■タバコの煙の成分
ほんの一部ですが、身近なもの・有害作用の順に挙げておきます。
・ニコチン…ゴキブリ駆除剤
有害作用：依存性薬物
・一酸化炭素…車の排気ガス
有害作用：酸素欠乏状態
・アンモニア…し尿
有害作用：肝障害
・カドミウム…電池
有害作用：腎障害

…恐ろしいものばかりなので、このくらいにしておきますね。

タバコは自分だけの問題ではありません。
自身と周囲の人への気遣いや健康を守るためにも禁煙、本格的に始めてみませんか…?

英語

Also, commonplace smoke is acidic.

■ Ingredients of tobacco smoke
One portion, familiar things, harmful effects caused in turn.
・Nicotine... cockroach repellent
Harmful effect: dependence on drugs
・Carbon monoxide... car exhaust fumes
Harmful effect: oxygen deficiency
・Ammonia... excrement
Harmful effect: liver difficulties
・Cadmium: batteries
Harmful effects: kidney damage

As they are only terrible things, it is done to this extent.

Tobacco isn't just a problem for yourself.
For consderation for yourself and the health of the people around you, won't you begin to try quitting smoking all-out?

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michael_1987はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2017/01/30 15:34:36

元の翻訳
Also, commonplace smoke is acidic.

■ Ingredients of tobacco smoke
One portion, familiar things, harmful effects caused in turn.
・Nicotine... cockroach repellent
Harmful effect: dependence on drugs
・Carbon monoxide... car exhaust fumes
Harmful effect: oxygen deficiency
・Ammonia... excrement
Harmful effect: liver difficulties
・Cadmium: batteries
Harmful effects: kidney damage

As they are only terrible things, it is done to this extent.

Tobacco isn't just a problem for yourself.
For consderation for yourself and the health of the people around you, won't you begin to try quitting smoking all-out?

修正後
Also, first hand smoke is acidic. Second hand smoke is alkaline, and stimulates the mucous in the nose and eyes.

■ Ingredients of tobacco smoke
This is only a small part, but I will list some of the familiarities and adverse effects.
・Nicotine... cockroach repellent
Harmful effect: dependence on drugs
・Carbon monoxide... car exhaust fumes
Harmful effect: oxygen deficiency
・Ammonia... excrement
Harmful effect: liver damage
・Cadmium: batteries
Harmful effects: kidney damage

There are only terrible things in tabacco, which is why I list them.

Tobacco isn't just a problem for yourself.
For consideration of yourself and the health of the people around you, won't you begin to really try quitting smoking?