翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

詳細を報告します。
　私達の会社はLED照明等を販売施工する会社です。
　事業多角化に伴い以前より手がけていたオートバイ用品の販売に本格的に取組むこととなりました。
　今現在用品販売はオークションサイトURL（・・・・・）で行っています。
　自社ショッピングサイトは構築中ですURL（・・・・・）
　　オークションサイト名は（・・・・）ですがショッピングサイトが完成後は（・・・・・）に統一します。
　会社のURLは（・・・）です　
　

英語

I inform you in detail:
Our company sells/constructs LED lights.
For diversification of business, we have decided to sell materials for motorcycle that we already moved into officially.
Currently, we sell the items at this auction site: URL（・・・・・）
Our company shopping site is under construction now: URL（・・・・・）
The aucution site is URL（・・・・・）, but it is integrated with （・・・・・） after completion.
Our company site is （・・・）.

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ep_ntt_thuyはこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2016/07/21 20:24:27

元の翻訳
I inform you in detail:
Our company sells/constructs LED lights.
For diversification of business, we have decided to sell materials for motorcycle that we already moved into officially.
Currently, we sell the items at this auction site: URL（・・・・・）
Our company shopping site is under construction now: URL（・・・・・）
The aucution site is URL（・・・・・）, but it is integrated with （・・・・・） after completion.
Our company site is （・・・）.

修正後
I inform you in detail:
Our company sells/constructs LED lights.
For diversification of business, we have decided to officially sell materials for motorcycle that we already moved into .
Currently, we sell the items at this auction site: URL（・・・・・）
Our company's shopping site is currently under construction: URL（・・・・・）
The auction site is URL（・・・・・）, but it will be integrated with （・・・・・） after completion.
Our company site is （・・・）.