翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

全国10名のｘｘｘｘｘｘ担当者
本社デモンストレーションスペシャリスト擁立
全国のソリューションスペシャリスト（プリセールスエンジニア）130名がデモンストレーションできる体制化
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②【デモ機の拡充】
モバイルルータの準備　　数台からスタート
③【学習環境の充実】
トレーニング動画、販売マニュアルの準備
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④【商談プロセスの改善】
商談増と期間短縮
導入決定権者へのアプローチを推進
トップセールス強化
ユーザ導入事例の充実
ネットワークエンジニアを商談早期に投入

商談数を増やすための具体的な活動

英語

10 responsible persons of xxx across the nation
Select10 specialist for demonstration in main office
Establish a system where 130 solution specialists (presales engineers) across the nation can demonstrate.

2. Expansion of the demonstration machine
Prepare the mobile router: start from a few pieces

3. Full development of the learning environment
Prepare the moving picture of the training and the manual for sales

4. Improvement of the process of the business meeting
Increase the business meetings and reducing the interval between them
Promote approach for those who have a right to determine the introduction
Reinforce the top sales
Develop an example of introducing the users
Include the network engineers in the early stage of the business meetings

Detailed activity for increasing the number of the business meeting

レビュー ( 1 )

yxn667はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2015/03/06 12:17:27

元の翻訳
10 responsible persons of xxx across the nation
Select10 specialist for demonstration in main office
Establish a system where 130 solution specialists (presales engineers) across the nation can demonstrate.

2. Expansion of the demonstration machine
Prepare the mobile router: start from a few pieces

3. Full development of the learning environment
Prepare the moving picture of the training and the manual for sales

4. Improvement of the process of the business meeting
Increase the business meetings and reducing the interval between them
Promote approach for those who have a right to determine the introduction
Reinforce the top sales
Develop an example of introducing the users
Include the network engineers in the early stage of the business meetings

Detailed activity for increasing the number of the business meeting

修正後
10 responsible persons of xxx across the nation
Select specialists for demonstration in main office
Establish a system where 130 solution specialists (presales engineers) across the nation can demonstrate.

2. Expansion of the demonstration machine
Prepare the mobile router: start from a few pieces

3. Full development of the learning environment
Prepare the moving picture of the training and the manual for sales

4. Improvement of the process of the business meeting
Increase the business meetings and reducing the period
Promote approach for those who have a right to determine the introduction
Reinforce the top sales
Develop an example of introducing the users
Include the network engineers in the early stage of the business meetings

Detailed activity for increasing the number of the business meeting

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