翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 52 / ネイティブ 日本語 / 1 Review / 2015/01/27 04:03:07

日本語

とっても楽しかったです!
本当に、見どころ満点です!まさか遊覧船に乗れるとは思っていなかったので、
テンションあがりました。
空は青空&白い雲で、湖面も波立っていなかったので鏡の世界のようでした。(ボリビア:ウユニ湖のようです)
船で渡った港町も、とってもステキな街並み。
チーズ工場の見学が終わった後、ランチ(自前)がてら散策しましたが、ここでもフィッシュ&チップスが、とっても美味しいです!
夢のような1日観光、大満足です。

英語

I really enjoyed myself! Satisfying with everything indeed! As I hardly expected to be able to get on the sightseeing boat, I got so excited. Blue sky and white cloud, and there is no ripple on the lake; it was like a mirror world. It looked like Uyuni lake in Bolivia.
I crossed over to the port town by boat and the views were wonderful. After visiting a cheese factory, I hanged around the town while looking for a restaurant for lucnch(my own expense). I found fish&chips scrumptious here too! It was a dream-like trip. So satisfied.

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hitomi-kumai 60 英語、フランス語から日本語への翻訳、日本語から英語への翻訳を行っております...
hitomi-kumaiはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2015/01/30 22:45:00

元の翻訳
I really enjoyed myself! Satisfying with everything indeed! As I hardly expected to be able to get on the sightseeing boat, I got so excited. Blue sky and white cloud, and there is no ripple on the lake; it was like a mirror world. It looked like Uyuni lake in Bolivia.
I crossed over to the port town by boat and the views were wonderful. After visiting a cheese factory, I hanged around the town while looking for a restaurant for lucnch(my own expense). I found fish&chips scrumptious here too! It was a dream-like trip. So satisfied.

修正後
I really enjoyed myself! I was satisfied with everything indeed! As I hardly expected to be able to get on the sightseeing boat, I got so excited. Blue sky and white cloud, and there is no ripple on the lake; it was like a mirror world. It looked like Uyuni lake in Bolivia.
I crossed over to the port town by boat and the views were wonderful. After visiting a cheese factory, I hanged around the town while looking for a restaurant for lunch (which was not included in the tour). I found a fish&chips shop here as well and it was so yummy! It was a dream-like trip. So satisfied.

Satisfying はA satisfiying tour とすれば良かったのかもしれません。

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