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評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2015/01/03 11:36:39

tearz
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日本語

長い間待たせてすまない
日本の正月も終わるので君の商品を発送する

私はAを2セット、bを3セットを持っている
私はbを800$で売りたい
今回君は全部でいくつ必要か?
必要な数を教えて

高額なので1度に全てを発送すると返送、紛失等のトラブルの時のリスクが大きいので分けて発送をしたい
そのかわり送料は私が負担する

ebayの相場が少し安くなってきたので、君への売値も少し下げます

君は壊れている(動作未確認の)商品でも購入できるか?

商品は到着したが君は不在だったようだ
確認して商品を受け取って欲しい


英語

I am sorry to keep you waiting for long.
As Japanese New Year is coming to an end, I will ship your item.

I have 2 sets of A and 3 sets of b.
I would like to sell b to you for $800.
How many do you need altogether this time?
Please let me know how many.

Since it is an expensive item, I would like to ship them seperately because shipping them altogether would be risky considering the trouble that may occurr at the time of returns, lost, etc. However, instead, I will cover the shipping charge.

As the eBay market has been slightly depreciating, I mark down my sale item to you a bit.

Are you able to purchase a defected item (without validation)?

The item was delivered to your door but you were absent.
Please kindly confirm and receive the item.

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[削除済みユーザ] 44
[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2015/01/04 11:38:42

元の翻訳
I am sorry to keep you waiting for long.
As Japanese New Year is coming to an end, I will ship your item.

I have 2 sets of A and 3 sets of b.
I would like to sell b to you for $800.
How many do you need altogether this time?
Please let me know how many.

Since it is an expensive item, I would like to ship them seperately because shipping them altogether would be risky considering the trouble that may occurr at the time of returns, lost, etc. However, instead, I will cover the shipping charge.

As the eBay market has been slightly depreciating, I mark down my sale item to you a bit.

Are you able to purchase a defected item (without validation)?

The item was delivered to your door but you were absent.
Please kindly confirm and receive the item.

修正後
I am sorry to have kept you waiting for long.
As Japanese New Year is coming to an end, I will ship your item.

I have 2 sets of A and 3 sets of b.
I would like to sell b to you for $800.
How many do you need altogether [word confusion] this time?
Please let me know how many.

Since it is an expensive item [singular], I would like to ship them [plural] seperately [spelling] because shipping them altogether [word confusion] would be risky considering the trouble that may occurr [spelling] at the time of returns, loss, etc. However, instead, I will cover the shipping charge.

As the eBay market has been slightly depreciating, I mark down my sales item to you a bit.

Are you able to purchase defective items (without validation [unclear])?

The item was delivered to your door, but you were absent.
Please kindly confirm and receive the item.

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