翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )
評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2014/10/23 15:57:52
【注意事項】
※イベント会場は、万全を期した上での運営をさせていただいておりますが、不審者・不審物を見かけた際には、警備員にお声掛け下さい。
※握手会参加の際には指輪やブレスレット等のアクセサリーは外して頂きますようよろしくお願いいたします。
※本イベントの安全な運営の為、主催者側がイベントに参加するにふさわしくないと判断した場合、特定のお客様にご参加をお断りする場合がございます。予めご了承下さい。
(Notes)
Although we manage the event hall by preparing perfectly, please let a guard know when you find a suspicious person or items.
We ask you to remove the accesories such as rings and bracelets, etc. when you participate in shaking hands.
In case where the sponsor decides that it is not appropriate to partcipate in the event for managing this event safely, we might refuse participation of some customers. We ask you to understand it in advance.
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元の翻訳
(Notes)
Although we manage the event hall by preparing perfectly, please let a guard know when you find a suspicious person or items.
We ask you to remove the accesories such as rings and bracelets, etc. when you participate in shaking hands.
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In case where the sponsor decides that it is not appropriate to partcipate in the event for managing this event safely, we might refuse participation of some customers. We ask you to understand it in advance.
修正後
Notes:
- Although we manage the event hall carefully, please let a guard know if you find suspicious people or items.
- We ask that you remove accessories such as rings, bracelets, etc. when shaking hands.
- In order to manage events safely, in cases where the sponsor decides that it is not appropriate to participate in the event, we may refuse participation to some customers. We ask that you understand this policy in advance.
「万全」という翻訳はたぶん「Perfect」ですが、英語で「I do something perfectly」ということはちょっと傲慢に聞こえます。だから、ここで「carefully」の方がいいと思います。
全角文字は半角文字に置き換えてください。