翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

リサ、無事届き受け取ってくれたことうれしく思っています。
オリビアの成長を日本からいつもいつも楽しみにしています。あなたと家族で本当に良かった。あなたの家族にもよろしくね。必ず会おうね。またメールするよ。
愛してます。由佳

英語

Lisa,I'm very happy that you got my mail.
I'm always happy to hear that you are growing up in Olivia.I'm really grateful to be your family.Say hi to your family.we'll meet again.I'll E-mail you latter.

レビュー ( 1 )

ozsamurai_69はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2014/10/12 21:28:25

元の翻訳
Lisa,I'm very happy that you got my mail.
I'm always happy to hear that you are growing up in Olivia.I'm really grateful to be your family.Say hi to your family.we'll meet again.I'll E-mail you latter.

修正後
Lisa,I'm very happy that you got my mail and you are safe.
[I'm always happy to hear that you are growing up in Olivia]. [I'm really grateful to be your family]. Say hi to your family. Let's get together again. I'll E-mail you again.
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Olivia is her daughter's name......↵
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I am always happy watching Olivia growing while I'm in Japan....↵
I think you and your family are wonerful..........

Sorry too many mistakes and omissions on this one. Better slow down a bit and read it well