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評価: 64 / ネイティブ 日本語 / 1 Review / 2014/10/06 14:38:47

ctplers99
ctplers99 64 フリーランス翻訳者Ctplers99と申します。日本語ネイティブで、翻訳者...
日本語

こんにちわ
この度は私のショップをご利用頂きありがとうございます
大変申し訳ないのですが配送トラブルの報告です
先日SAL書留で送った商品が東京郵便局から戻ってきました
理由はデンマークにはSAL書留で送れないようです
ですのであらためてSAL便で送ります
発送予定日は10月7日
到着予定日は10月21日～11月4日です
商品の到着まで、もうしばらくお待ちください
この度はお待ち頂くことになり申し訳ありません
お取引の最後までしっかり対応させて頂きます
なにかあればいつでもご連絡ください

英語

Hello.
Thank you for your using my shop.
I'm very sorry to inform you of the trouble regarding the delivery.
The merchandise I sent with SAL registered mail the other day was sent back to me from Tokyo Post Office.
It's because SAL registered mail is not available in Denmark.
So I send it to you using SAL again.
The expected shipping date is 7th on October.
The expected arrival date is from 21st on October to 4th on November.
Please wait for receiving the merchandise a little while.
I'm very sorry to keep you waiting this time.
I'm going to address the issue until the business completed.
Don't hesitate to contact us if you have any question.

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ilad 52 公文書（英日）、企業内部文書、社内マニュアル（英⇔日）、正規の翻訳会社から...
iladはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/10/17 15:49:35

元の翻訳
Hello.
Thank you for your using my shop.
I'm very sorry to inform you of the trouble regarding the delivery.
The merchandise I sent with SAL registered mail the other day was sent back to me from Tokyo Post Office.
It's because SAL registered mail is not available in Denmark.
So I send it to you using SAL again.
The expected shipping date is 7th on October.
The expected arrival date is from 21st on October to 4th on November.
Please wait for receiving the merchandise a little while.
I'm very sorry to keep you waiting this time.
I'm going to address the issue until the business completed.
Don't hesitate to contact us if you have any question.

修正後
Hello.
Thank you for using my shop.
I'm very sorry to inform you of the trouble regarding the delivery.
The merchandise I sent by SAL registered mail the other day was sent back to me from a post office in Tokyo.
It's because SAL registered mail is not available in Denmark.
So I send it to you using SAL again.
The expected shipping date is 7th on October.
The expected arrival date is from 21st on October to 4th on November.
Please wait for receiving the merchandise a little while.
I'm very sorry to keep you waiting this time.
I'm going to address the issue until the business completed.
Don't hesitate to contact us if you have any question.

detail.chiebukuro.yahoo.co.jp 「a post office in Tokyo と書くほうが普通かと思います。」

ctplers99 ctplers99 2014/10/17 15:54:20

ご指摘ありがとうございます。次回に生かしたいと思います。レビューありがとうございました。

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