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日本語

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宜しくお願いします。

英語

I finshed paying about the order you ordered today, so please check.
I would like to get product soon, so please send it in rapid.
Best regards

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antimony_sb7はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2014/09/04 22:14:36

元の翻訳
I finshed paying about the order you ordered today, so please check.
I would like to get product soon, so please send it in rapid.
Best regards

修正後
I've paid the invoice for the order placed today, so please check and confirm for me.
I need it sooner rather than later, so please send it via expedited mail.
Best regards,

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★"と評価しました 2014/09/05 14:28:04

元の翻訳
I finshed paying about the order you ordered today, so please check.
I would like to get product soon, so please send it in rapid.
Best regards

修正後
I finshed [spelling] paying about [wrong proposition] the order you [wrong subject] ordered today, so please check.
I would like to get [article missing] product soon, so please send it in rapid [?].
Best regards