翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

本日購入すると何日に届きますか？
１週間程度で届いてほしいのですが、早く発送することはできますか？
追加の料金は支払できます。

EMSで４～７日は無理でしょうか？

よろしくお願い致します

英語

If I purchase today, when would I receive the item?
I would like to receive it within about a week, so I wonder if you could ship it as early as possible.
I would be happy to pay any additional fee for fast delivery.

Would I be able to receive the item within 4-7 days by EMS?

Thank you and best regards.

レビュー ( 2 )

acdcasicはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/09/01 16:58:12

追加料金のところ、anyだと大げさに聞こえる（1万円でも10万円でも、という感じ？）になりかねないので、自分ならsomeまたは何もなしにするかもしれません。コンテキストにもよりますのでanyが間違いとはまったく思いませんが。

[emrt]

レビュー及びアドバイスありがとうございます。大変勉強になります。

chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/09/02 21:21:29

元の翻訳
If I purchase today, when would I receive the item?
I would like to receive it within about a week, so I wonder if you could ship it as early as possible.
I would be happy to pay any additional fee for fast delivery.

Would I be able to receive the item within 4-7 days by EMS?

Thank you and best regards.

修正後
If I purchased the item today, when would I receive the item?
I would like to receive it within a week or so, so I wonder if you could ship it via express shipment option.
I would be happy to pay any additional fee for fast delivery.

Would I be able to receive the item within 4-7 days by EMS?

Thank you and best regards.

[emrt]

レビュー並びに添削ありがとうございます。大変勉強になりました。