翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

あなたの健康状態について質問させていただきます。
回答の結果は、採用選考及び適切な職場配置や健康管理の基礎資料としてのみ使用し、あなたの同意なく第三者に提供することはございません。
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英語

This is inquiry about your health.
Your answers shall only used as the basic information for recruiting, proper positioning, and health control and not be provided to a third party without your agreement.

Our business policy is "**". Thus we note the importance of employees who use our system to enter a company and our future employee as well will be able to make a great performance utilizing their abilities.

Although it's essential to maintain physical and mental health, some employees pushes themselves to fit in a new working environment.

レビュー ( 1 )

kanon84はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/08/21 02:12:19

元の翻訳
This is inquiry about your health.
Your answers shall only used as the basic information for recruiting, proper positioning, and health control and not be provided to a third party without your agreement.

Our business policy is "**". Thus we note the importance of employees who use our system to enter a company and our future employee as well will be able to make a great performance utilizing their abilities.

Although it's essential to maintain physical and mental health, some employees pushes themselves to fit in a new working environment.

修正後
The following questions are about your health.
Your answers shall only be used as the basic information for recruiting, proper positioning, and health control and will not be provided to a third party without your agreement.

Our business policy is "**". Thus we note the importance of employees who use our system to enter a company, along with our own employees, being able to make a great performance utilizing their abilities.

Although it is essential to maintain physical and mental health, some employees push themselves to fit in a new working environment.

Check for grammar and missing verbs. Great job otherwise.

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Thanks a lot for your review:)