翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: 丁寧な言葉でお願いします。

日本語

大変申し訳ございません。私達は別の商品を発送してしまいました。お手数ですが、もし手元に届きましたらお客様の方で破棄して頂けますか？そしてご注文の商品は発送できなくなりました。迷惑料として全額の返金とそれに加えて10ポンドをAmazonからお返しいたします。返金の入金には数日間かかる可能性があります。お客様の元に届かないのは大変残念です。私達のお店を訪れて頂きありがとうございました。

英語

Please accept our sincere apologies for having shipped the wrong item to you. We are sorry to bother you, but would you please discard the item upon receipt at your end? Please also know that the item of your item is no longer available for shipment. As a sign of our apologies, we will issue you a full refund with additional GBP10.00 compensation. The refund may take several days to be deposited into your account. It is truly our regret that we could not delivery your order to you. Nonetheless, thank you very much for having visited to our store.

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jesse-okaはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/08/18 22:00:30

元の翻訳
Please accept our sincere apologies for having shipped the wrong item to you. We are sorry to bother you, but would you please discard the item upon receipt at your end? Please also know that the item of your item is no longer available for shipment. As a sign of our apologies, we will issue you a full refund with additional GBP10.00 compensation. The refund may take several days to be deposited into your account. It is truly our regret that we could not delivery your order to you. Nonetheless, thank you very much for having visited to our store.

修正後
Please accept our sincere apologies for having shipped the wrong item to you. We are sorry to bother you, but would you please discard the item upon receipt at your end? Please also know that the item of your item is no longer available for shipment. As a sign of our apologies, we will issue you a full refund with additional GBP10.00 compensation. The refund may take several days to be deposited into your account. It is truly our regret that we could not delivery your order to you. Nonetheless, thank you very much for having visited our store.

visitは他動詞的使いかたですのでtoはいりません。
例えば　visit a friend 友人を訪問する
　　　　visit Paris　バリを訪れる
　　　　visit the sick　見舞いに行く
となります。

[tearz]

レビューありがとうございました。
懐かしい英文法の授業が聞けてよかったです。
ちなみにParis＝パリ、バリ＝Baliです。
カタカナ表記が違うようですのでご参考まで。