翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

私は今までずっと日本で生活してきたため、シドニー大学の交換留学生として一年間寮生活することで、これまでに会ったことのない様々な価値観とバックグラウンドを持った人たちと交流できると考えています。私は将来は貧困や児童労働などの世界の問題の解決に携わりたいので、オーストラリアで様々な価値観を持つ人たちと話し、自分の視野を広げることは非常に大切だと考えています。寮で生活することができれば、寮以外で生活するよりも多くの人と密に交流でき、様々な価値観に触れることができると考えています。

英語

As I have lived in Japan, I think this 1-year opportunity to spend as an exchange student at University of Sydney in a student residence will bring me quality interactions with people from various values and backgrounds that I have never met before. As my future career interest includes the resolution of the global issues such as poverty and child labour, I very much value the significance of broaden my horizons by communicating with people with various sense of values in Australia. The life at a student residency will help me expose to the in-depth interactions with many more people than living off campus, as well as the diversified sense of values.

レビュー ( 1 )

ctplers99はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/08/17 20:21:33

元の翻訳
As I have lived in Japan, I think this 1-year opportunity to spend as an exchange student at University of Sydney in a student residence will bring me quality interactions with people from various values and backgrounds that I have never met before. As my future career interest includes the resolution of the global issues such as poverty and child labour, I very much value the significance of broaden my horizons by communicating with people with various sense of values in Australia. The life at a student residency will help me expose to the in-depth interactions with many more people than living off campus, as well as the diversified sense of values.

修正後
As I have lived in Japan, I think this 1-year opportunity to spend as an exchange student at University of Sydney in a student residence will bring me quality interactions with people from various values and backgrounds that I have never met before. As my future career interest includes the resolution of the global issues such as poverty and child labour, I very much value the significance of broadening my horizons by communicating with people with various sense of values in Australia. The life at a student residency will help me expose to the in-depth interactions with many more people than living off campus, as well as the diversified sense of values.

broadenのところだけでした。それがなければ、素晴らしく星５つです。