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日本語

本日の午後、銀行を訪問しました。　
当初、銀行側はウガンダ向け中古車のUSD小切手は偽造の割合が９０％を超えていることを理由に正式な受付を拒否しました。その後、交渉の結果、添付ファイルのとおり、本日付で小切手の取立てを正式に受付しました。
しかし、現地、Wells　Fargo　N.A　銀行への確認と当社資金化には3週間程度かかると言われました。
当社はあくまで資金化を確認するまでは、船積みの準備をしませんのでご了承ください。
また、もし偽造小切手であった場合、当社は法的に対処します。

英語

We have visited the bank in the afternoon of that day.
At first, the bank declined to accept the check in USD from the second hand vehicles to Uganda formally, by the reason that the odds of the fake exceeds 90%. However after and as the result of our some persuasion, they formally accept the collection of the check as of that day as the file attached. But they told us it took about 3 weeks
for them to confirm to the spot and Wells Fargo N.A and to transfer the cash to our company.
Please understand we couldn't prepare to ship until the confirmation on the transfer of the money.
In addition, when the check proves the scam, we will take the legal measures.

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2014/08/14 14:17:30

元の翻訳
We have visited the bank in the afternoon of that day.
At first, the bank declined to accept the check in USD from the second hand vehicles to Uganda formally, by the reason that the odds of the fake exceeds 90%. However after and as the result of our some persuasion, they formally accept the collection of the check as of that day as the file attached. But they told us it took about 3 weeks↵
for them to confirm to the spot and Wells Fargo N.A and to transfer the cash to our company.
Please understand we couldn't prepare to ship until the confirmation on the transfer of the money.
In addition, when the check proves the scam, we will take the legal measures.

修正後
We visited the bank this afternoon.
At first, the bank declined to accept the check in USD for the second hand vehicles to Uganda, for the reason that the odds of being a fake exceeds 90%. However, as the result of our some persuasion [word choice], they accept [tense confusion] the check today as you can see in the file attached. But they told us it took [tense confusion] about 3 weeks for them to confirm with Wells Fargo N.A to transfer the cash to our company.
Please understand we couldn't prepare to ship until the confirmation on the transfer of the money.
In addition, if the check proves to be scam, we will take legal measures.