翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )
評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2014/08/10 23:24:18
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ここにいる皆さんは、営業だと思いますが、
営業の仕事をしていると、絶対に“避けては通れない事”がありますよね？
何だと思いますか？
それは、お客様からの、クレームです。
皆さん、クレームやトラブルは嫌ですか？
誰だって、お客様からのお叱りは、本当に嫌です。
もちろん、私も今まで様々なクレームとトラブルを経験してきました。
クレーム処理は確かに大変です。ですが、同時にチャンスでもあるんですよ！
たとえば、お客様から「ここの翻訳の文章は、直訳すぎる。もっと目を惹く翻訳の文章にしてほしかった。
I assume that everyone in here is a sales rep and there is there is always something that a sales rep cannot avoid.
That is a customer complaint.
Do you hate receiving complaints from your customers?
We all really hate to receive severe dressing-downs from our customers.
Ofcourse, I have experienced so many different customer complaints and troubles.
The complaints are indeed very difficult to deal with, but they are also a chance to flourish your business!
For example, if a customer complains "Your translation is too direct. I wanted something more appealing to the readers.
レビュー ( 1 )
元の翻訳
I assume that everyone in here is a sales rep and there is there is always something that a sales rep cannot avoid.
That is a customer complaint.
Do you hate receiving complaints from your customers?
We all really hate to receive severe dressing-downs from our customers.
Ofcourse, I have experienced so many different customer complaints and troubles.
The complaints are indeed very difficult to deal with, but they are also a chance to flourish your business!
For example, if a customer complains "Your translation is too direct. I wanted something more appealing to the readers.
修正後
I assume that everyone in here is a sales rep and there is always something that a sales rep cannot avoid.
What do you think it is?↵
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It is customer complaint.
Do you hate receiving complaints from your customers?
We all really hate to receive severe dressing-downs from our customers.
Of course, I have experienced so many different customer complaints and troubles.
The complaints are indeed very difficult to deal with, but they are also a chance to flourish your business!
For example, if a customer complains "Your translation is too direct. I wanted something more appealing to the readers.
a を外して一般的なcomplaintにしました。本当は複数形が一番自然ですが、一文目がThere IS だったので、aを外すという選択肢をとりました。
このレビューを100％の人が「適切であった」と回答しています。
評価とコメントありがとうございます。なんと、重大な訳抜けが。。。直して頂いて感謝します。確かに、It is customer complaintのほうが自然ですね。特にスピーチ原稿となると余計にそう思います。とても勉強になりました。これからもよろしくお願いいたします。