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日本語

25歳アルバイトの立山愛美さんのビフォーアフターのテーマは

ナチュラルキュートな夏色ショートバング

全体がワンレングスベースで重く、もたついた印象。
そこから、表面が動きやすくなるようにレイヤーを入れ、メリハリを出す。
前髪を思い切って眉上に設定し、活発なイメージに。
カラーも耳上にハイライトを入れ、オレンジブラウンで軽さとカジュアル感を出して。
ソフトワックスを毛先に揉み込んでフィニッシュ。

軟毛で乾燥が気になるロングレイヤーから、内側の毛量を調整して膨らみを抑え、頭をコンパクトに。

英語

25 year old part timer, Ms. Aimi Tachiyama's " Before and After Theme" is "Natural cute look with light, summer color and short bangs".

Before, she had no layers but had thick, heavy, bulky look.
First, we started with giving layers in the surface to define and create movements in the hair.
The bangs were cut short above the eyebrows to give an active impression.
We've highlighted above the ears with orange-brown color for light and casual look.
Applied a bit of hair wax on the tip of the hair for the final touch.

We have turned her dry, thin, long hair into something different by controlling the inner volume of the hair and making her head look small.

レビュー ( 1 )

hiro_ure_87はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/07/07 15:52:28

元の翻訳
25 year old part timer, Ms. Aimi Tachiyama's " Before and After Theme" is "Natural cute look with light, summer color and short bangs".

Before, she had no layers but had thick, heavy, bulky look.
First, we started with giving layers in the surface to define and create movements in the hair.
The bangs were cut short above the eyebrows to give an active impression.
We've highlighted above the ears with orange-brown color for light and casual look.
Applied a bit of hair wax on the tip of the hair for the final touch.

We have turned her dry, thin, long hair into something different by controlling the inner volume of the hair and making her head look small.

修正後
Ms. Aimi Tachiyama, the 25 year old part timer, sets the theme for " Before and After" as a 'natural and cute look with light color and short bangs for the summer.'

She had no layers and had a bulky look.
We started with giving layers on the surface to create movements in the hair.
The bangs were cut short above the eyebrows to give an active impression.
We also highlighted hair above ears with orange-brown color for a light and casual look.
Finally, we applied a bit of hair wax on the tip of the hair for the final touch.

She used to have dry, thin, and long hair, but we could change the inner volume of the hair to make her head look smaller.